All Comments on 'Girl Gone Mild'

Welcome back, Lothario! It's good to see you've decided to submit something else, and once again, it's a great story. I hope this means you'll be posting a few more stories, maybe even something which follows on from this one? But even if that's not to be, this is one story I'll be sure to re-read at some point in the future, it's just that good. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

Lothario,

Great that you're back with another story! Well-written, good pacing, while still being very sexy!! Keep writing these -- all of your stories have been great! Thank You!!!

Glad your at it again and I really hope this becomes more than one chapter. You are a very talented writer and I like your stories. Thanks.

Iam so glad u decided to write again. The story is great too lol Jessy

Oh my gosh! Such an awesome story. I do so hope that you write another chapter to this story. I loved it and the timing and pacing was fantastic. You truly are a fantastic author.

This can't be a one time thing at Spring Break. It seems like there is such a connection that they'll continue to be together even after Spring Break is over. I certainly hope so, i see a lot of myself in Brian, so I really do hope, there's another chapter and things work out between them.

Great work; I'd love to see it continued & find out what happens to these two during the rest of spring break!

Come on, after such a long time you can't stop here ...

That is all there is to say

I enjoyed this story very much. You may right that this was not destined to continue, but who knows. People connect in many wonderful ways. This couple almost sounded like soulmates.

Boyd

great story

...that my previous comment, declaring this not one of your better works, has disappeared...

... is that you're surprised to find a technical glitch on a Literotica page. But no worries, dude, you fought the system and made your voice heard. You wanted people to know this story sucked, and you won. Now it's Miller Time. You've earned it.

Lothario whatever :) Relax man, your story is good.. We who know how to read truly enjoy you and your thinking.. There are some here that can't understand anything more than four letter words and so they expect to meet them in every sentence.. Don't worry about that, have fun and write instead.. Cheers Yoron

Only 14 comments? A very well written story, with realistic characters acting like responsible people. Good story well done.

Chilley

Brilliant. Great talent.