All Comments on 'Girl Visits Aunt Uncle and Twins Ch. 01'

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WetheNorthWetheNorthabout 1 year ago

In most English speaking countries if the boys mother is her aunt then the boys are her cousins

Satsumabook123Satsumabook123about 1 year agoAuthor

If that is the worst criticism my story receives I am more than happy.

I hope many people enjoy it warts and all.

mfveltrimfveltriabout 1 year ago

When will you finish the story

Satsumabook123Satsumabook123about 1 year agoAuthor

Chapter 2 published. More to come later.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No explanation as to why the boys were not her cousins.

Satsumabook123Satsumabook123about 1 year agoAuthor

I am genuinely sorry that there must be something which I have missed in my story. They are meant to be her cousins as they would be as they are her aunts boys.

mfveltrimfveltriabout 1 year ago

It’s a great story with so many possibilities with her controlling the boys, fun with her aunt, and enjoying her uncle. Keep it going.

Thanks

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...