All Comments on 'Girlfriend to Goddess'

Nice to see you writing again. Look forward to Ch. 2.

I loved all of this, the tickling and the pantyhose...the whole story!

Loved it, really erotic and sexy. cant wait to read more of your work. loved the command to kiss her feet the whole scene was amazing

Loved it. can’t wait to see what happens with the stockings. Love when a women talks dirty.

Great story waiting for the next chapter with the stockings.

Good premise.

But barely a beginning.

And the sex is so matter-of-fact.

Lacks all the details that could have made it erotic. As it is, it's just a laundry list of steps.

Playing with her boobs? Nope. Playing with her pussy? Nope. Her playing with his cock? Nope. Eating her pussy? Not at all. Some blowjob action? Not.

Three stars.

Well your stories certainly get me off!! Thank you! Keep it up!!

Great story. Liked it a lot