All Comments on 'Girlfriends'

Great premise. The shifts make the story hard to follow.

I can't wait for the next part please write it soon

Great story. I want to hear the next episode.

Just found your stories, and they correspond with some of my experiences. Brings back memories. Good Memories, intense, unforgettable life changing events.

And not just one! How about a third story about A David/Dianne/Carol threesome where Dianne and Carol explore their bi side? This was a great story. And well written. Thanks!

I like this and it makes sense. Most of the time, I can see Dianne's reactions and confusion. I don't get a real good sense of the other woman and the other husband just sort of hangs out there. I might have been tempted to have the second husband not knowing....at least through this first wave of the story so we can concentrate on Dianne's 'awakening' here.

But I like your style of writing.....just enough humor (absolutely the movement from penis, dick to cock!) and confusion and heat involved. And that little scene where you have Dianne close her eyes and you get her to touch herself and imagine things. happening to her........that's one of my favorite things to do to a woman who is 'open' to it all!

Yup she's going to ride David's big dick and they all live happily ever after.

But no one ever explores the other side ( well rarely ). What happens when he becomes a little jealous because David is taking her places she's never been before? What happens when he starts feeling bad because sex with him is never as good as it is with David ? What happens when she opens up sexually and suddenly realizes husband isn't doing it for her any more? When she starts sneaking around or just plain announces that David is now a permanent part of her love life? When he starts taking her for weekends?

I dare you to look at that side of the coin rather than just another fairy tail(pun intended) story!

That story was one of the best stories that I have ever seen on Voyeurweb,

and perhaps the very best. Why? Because the guy's wife was incredibly sexy,

beyond sexy, and her most endearing qualitiy is her loyalty and marital

fidelity. When I read some stories, I would want to see the woman get fucked

by everyone. But not this woman. If she screws David, she will go from

being a one-of-a-kind to just another bland generic whore. I don't know

exactly how you've done it, but in this story you have synthesized the

sexiest woman I have ever read about -- a roaringly sexual erotic

and faithful wife. Do yourself (and your readers) a favor and carefully

consider all the ramifications of the various directions you could take

this story. How, for example?

-- she screws David and your story morphs into the worn-out cuckold/ordivorce/revenge blah blah blah

-- The couple continues to effectively utilize fantasy in their marriage,

but something comes up that prevents their self-destruction (perhaps

serendipity when David's unknown-to-us wife finds out and stops him,

perhaps David tires of Carol and dumps her and moves on; or perhaps

Diane has a leap of logic and books a motel room for David at her expense

and then takes her husband on an impromp to getaway vacation

(and fucks her husband silly on that vacation); perhaps neither Diane

nor her husband actually want her to cinsumate the tryst but they think they are doing what their spouse wants so they move

towards it until finally at the last minute Diane realizes she doesn't

want to be just another Carol.)

Whatever the method of the "almost tryst" you have far more options

with the non-consummated direction. You could add Carol and perhaps

Tom to the party or example, perhaps Diane could "dress to impress"

and one-up Carol to try to please her husband,

and start the evening in a very sexy outfit end up topless at some

point during after dinner drinks, perhaps from a dare(s) from her husband

or from one of the others. That could fuel a plethora of future bedtime fantasies.

Of course there would ample opportunities to describe Diane and Carol

in intimate detail! And does David's mystery wife crash the party and reveal

to everyone that David has VD? (I digress) Does Carol get jealous of Diane?

Does everyone but Diane and her husband have an orgy?

In summary, the most pragmatic story line would be one where Diane "stops short"

of ruining what she and her husband have, the best of both fantasy and reality.

And thus Diane remains the sexiest and perhaps the most unique wife on

Literotica.

A little fantasy playing is one thing. Crossing the line is another. Please, do NOT have them go through with this! I love stories of Fidelity and resisting temptation. Not where Marriages are opened up and then irrevocably changed, often for the worse. Don't do it.

There are always things to 'quibble about' in writing, but in general, this is a great opening to a good story. Yes, it's a good story because it has real heat, and lovely sex. But also because they principals are all.....well, to me anyway.....very real. The excitement and the back and forth with the husband and wife is very real (even if the husband seems a bit 'too eager'..grin.

But the writing is terrific. I pick out one sentence to show the 'reality' of the writing, but the humor as well. " I knew my willy was now swelling past the penis stage, well on its way to dick, hoping to make it all the way to cock before this ended. " I laughed out loud at that line and at the same time felt more kinship with the main character.

I've placed this story in my fav's list.

Don't know if you'll see this, but thanks for the compliments! I do enjoy working things such as that sentence into the stories, and am glad you "got it"!

About as close to a perfect story that I've read on this site. Just incredible. Romancer should be getting paid for this quality of work. So believable, so erotic and so worrisome for Jack if he bothered to think with the head on his shoulders instead of the one between his legs! I have to agree with one of the other commenters: we can love Diane as the good wife who gets turned on by this stud but brings her loving home, but if she crosses that line. . .