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Collapsing on top of her, I still held most of my weight off, as her arms encircled me and we both gasped to get our breaths back. Finally recovering, I rolled to the side, still in her as I softened, and kissed her gently.

"Mmmm... that was wonderful," I said, and she answered with her own "Mmm-hmm," and we cuddled on our sides, finally falling asleep - I don't remember just how, but we woke up in the morning, under covers, still naked, a good night's sleep well received by both of us.

And so began our next chapter, that of fantasizing about Dianne with David. I was careful not to make it the mainstay of our sex life, but every once in a while, maybe once a month, I'd work it into our love making. Sometimes it would be like the first time, when I narrated on her behalf. Sometimes, all I'd have to do is suggest she imagine my being David, and she would wordlessly, with eyes closed, zone off into her own fantasy, while I went into my own. Sometimes, I could even get her to relate her own version.

I wouldn't say that sex was always better with the imagined David involved. In fact, if anything, having that option let us connect one-to-one better, since we had that little secret in common. It somehow brought us into a more intimate sharing with each other. But the sessions with "David" always did have an urgency, a tinge of the forbidden, that made those times fun and naughty for both of us.

One night, as we were making love, I "invited David" again, and verbalized his not just being there to fuck Dianne, but to fuck her with me. I detailed how we would both take off her clothes and cover her with kisses, how we would take turns tonguing her labia and clit until she had orgasmed over and over and cried to be penetrated, how I would take her first, while she stroked and watched David's cock hard and impatient for its turn, and how he would finally get that, filling her up with his cock and then with his semen, bringing her to come again. She was swept into the fantasy, and came for me as I sucked on her clit, and again while I fucked her and described her wantings, and finally when "David" fucked her and came in her, which I did in his stead.

A couple of weeks after that, two things happened almost simultaneously. First, we were chatting at breakfast one Saturday. Since I'd wanted not to compromise any thinking along those lines with the heat of the moment, I had intentionally stayed mum on the "David" front for a bit.

"Uh, Dianne," I started. "There's something I'd like your honest view on."

"Sure," she said, sitting down across from me with her coffee, hearing the serious tone.

"We have enjoyed 'David,' in our imaginations, and left it at that. Since you haven't been back to Carol's for some time, do you think she'll press getting you two together, more than that last time, and if she does, have you considered, ah, cooperating?"

"Oh - that!" she said, sounding relieved it wasn't something like my changing jobs, or having some medical diagnosis to share. "I don't know - about her pressing it, that is. But even if she does, I'm not interested in messing around behind your back - never was, never have, never will."

"Not even if I was there, and it was ok?"

"Oh, that again. I don't know - I'd never want to disappoint you, but that would be so risky in so many ways, I just don't know about going along with that."

"OK, just wondering. Anyway, it's fun having fictitious 'David' join in from time to time."

"Yes, and it's harmless as it is."

And that pretty much ended that, until the next day, she sat me down in a similar fashion and said, "There's something that's come up."

I went through a similar, oh no, what could it be moment, but she quickly continued, "I got a call from Carol. She says that David has a chance to present a paper at a conference at the --- Hotel, the one only two blocks away. It's a real opportunity for him and will look good on his resume, but he can't really afford the nightly rate and it's an all day plus dinners agenda, so it would be tough for him to commute. She asked if she could tell him he could stay with us. I told her I'd get back to her, that I'd have to check with you first. There's nothing we have planned for that - it's a Wednesday-Thursday thing, and he could come up Tuesday after work, then leave Friday if it's ok. What do you think?"

What did I think? Everything except convenience, expense, calendar, and so forth. What I was thinking was Carol's continuing her campaign to get him in bed with Dianne, and the opportunity that three days with us would afford, never mind the chance to extend that past his busy time at the conference.

What I said in response will be covered in a sequel to this, if readers seem to be interested. Comments welcomed!

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Steve OrshonSteve Orshonalmost 5 years ago
Wow.

About as close to a perfect story that I've read on this site. Just incredible. Romancer should be getting paid for this quality of work. So believable, so erotic and so worrisome for Jack if he bothered to think with the head on his shoulders instead of the one between his legs! I have to agree with one of the other commenters: we can love Diane as the good wife who gets turned on by this stud but brings her loving home, but if she crosses that line. . .

romancerromanceralmost 5 years agoAuthor
To Anon: Excellent Start

Don't know if you'll see this, but thanks for the compliments! I do enjoy working things such as that sentence into the stories, and am glad you "got it"!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent start

There are always things to 'quibble about' in writing, but in general, this is a great opening to a good story. Yes, it's a good story because it has real heat, and lovely sex. But also because they principals are all.....well, to me anyway.....very real. The excitement and the back and forth with the husband and wife is very real (even if the husband seems a bit 'too eager'..grin.

But the writing is terrific. I pick out one sentence to show the 'reality' of the writing, but the humor as well. " I knew my willy was now swelling past the penis stage, well on its way to dick, hoping to make it all the way to cock before this ended. " I laughed out loud at that line and at the same time felt more kinship with the main character.

I've placed this story in my fav's list.

jharpjharpover 5 years ago

A little fantasy playing is one thing. Crossing the line is another. Please, do NOT have them go through with this! I love stories of Fidelity and resisting temptation. Not where Marriages are opened up and then irrevocably changed, often for the worse. Don't do it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
don't ruin it

That story was one of the best stories that I have ever seen on Voyeurweb,

and perhaps the very best. Why? Because the guy's wife was incredibly sexy,

beyond sexy, and her most endearing qualitiy is her loyalty and marital

fidelity. When I read some stories, I would want to see the woman get fucked

by everyone. But not this woman. If she screws David, she will go from

being a one-of-a-kind to just another bland generic whore. I don't know

exactly how you've done it, but in this story you have synthesized the

sexiest woman I have ever read about -- a roaringly sexual erotic

and faithful wife. Do yourself (and your readers) a favor and carefully

consider all the ramifications of the various directions you could take

this story. How, for example?

-- she screws David and your story morphs into the worn-out cuckold/ordivorce/revenge blah blah blah

-- The couple continues to effectively utilize fantasy in their marriage,

but something comes up that prevents their self-destruction (perhaps

serendipity when David's unknown-to-us wife finds out and stops him,

perhaps David tires of Carol and dumps her and moves on; or perhaps

Diane has a leap of logic and books a motel room for David at her expense

and then takes her husband on an impromp to getaway vacation

(and fucks her husband silly on that vacation); perhaps neither Diane

nor her husband actually want her to cinsumate the tryst but they think they are doing what their spouse wants so they move

towards it until finally at the last minute Diane realizes she doesn't

want to be just another Carol.)

Whatever the method of the "almost tryst" you have far more options

with the non-consummated direction. You could add Carol and perhaps

Tom to the party or example, perhaps Diane could "dress to impress"

and one-up Carol to try to please her husband,

and start the evening in a very sexy outfit end up topless at some

point during after dinner drinks, perhaps from a dare(s) from her husband

or from one of the others. That could fuel a plethora of future bedtime fantasies.

Of course there would ample opportunities to describe Diane and Carol

in intimate detail! And does David's mystery wife crash the party and reveal

to everyone that David has VD? (I digress) Does Carol get jealous of Diane?

Does everyone but Diane and her husband have an orgy?

In summary, the most pragmatic story line would be one where Diane "stops short"

of ruining what she and her husband have, the best of both fantasy and reality.

And thus Diane remains the sexiest and perhaps the most unique wife on

Literotica.

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