All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Daughter'

You really are brilliant, more, more and MORE of the same PLEASE !!!!

Hopefully many more chapters with these three involved.

You could get the trademark but nothing the patent

Decent idea, but kinda repetitive and boring. Nine inch cock over and over - unlikely and just passe. Fine concept, should have been better. 3*s

From reading most of your earlier work this doesnt measure up at all I give it a 2 at best maybe 3 . I dont know whats going on with your writing but there has been a change with your for sure.

wow!!!!! What happened with gram, and the lady next door? Did daddy go to a frat party

Great story!!!! Hope there are more chapters coming.

Self-aggrandizing , degrading , not particularly realistic

I agree...9"...9"....9"... slut...slut...whore....

Daddy gonna make you beg for more...more...more....🤦‍♂️

The guy is a crude asshole. 2 **

You never disappoint! The dialogue made it! Hope there is more!

Doesn't read like silkstockinlover. Wonder who wrote it. silk writes better.

I love this story. It makes me wish my wife would squirt over my daughters chest in 1.5 years when she turns 18. Have you actually done sit-ups with butt plug in yourself?

Not your best work I give in a 2 . Same thing over and over again

Not very good at portraying your female characters as real human beings.

Did he have a 9” cock or something!

I liked part of this story as it has two ingredients I like in an erotic story: kinkiness and certain romanticism. I think it is hard to believe that the story hasn't been written by a man. I didn't like the part about a mother boasting about gangbangs and making a bukkake with 50 men. I hated that part instead I liked the part where the man in the story wanted no other men involved. I know it is unfair but this is my cup of tea: a group of a man and several women with strong bonds and no other men involved. As soon as other men intervene fucking the women in the group, the story is ruined for me. That's way I don't like many of this author's works.

wonder if amanda's mom will join the fun?

Awesome story again!

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

I loved this story. Would be great to see this as a series, since you eluded to it with added the various women including grandma. Ive always loved your stories, keep them "cumming"

Way to inspire a girl, call her a whore, right? Far from erotic. More like just degrading to every woman involved.

I wonder if this guy has a nine inch dick? The author wanted to make sure that we didn't miss the fact. A story that is every mans fantasy. I liked it.

Five stars, Jas. Great rendition of a classic male fantasy. I admit I have had it with my next-door neighbor and her mother. But now how about the female version? The woman is shacked up with the father. The son comes back from school. What would you use as the physical attribute equivalent to the 9" cock? Tough question for me because I'm not a big tits fan. Some sweet feet with red-painted toenails would work for me. Dad and son with feet and toes fetish? I leave it to you. Dad and son sucking cocks? I leave that to you. Just looking for a woman fucking with a father and son. I had a woman tell me she wanted to do my son too.

Could have been really good.

The concept of the story was excellent, with a guy doing a mother and daughter and M and D doing each other willingly, but this was just one long big dick story and how women can’t resist it no matter what the owner of the said dick did with it. He was a complete asshole that created little empathy or even admiration in how he treated women; which is generally a turn off for me.

SSL is better than this normally so, like others have said, I’m not sure what went wrong here

Is this a parody? If so, I'll give it 5 stars. If it's meant to be an actual story, I'll give it 2, 1 for the effort and 1 for the decent grammar, which you don't often find in this style of the genre.

Really, who wrote this? It was so below the quality of your other stories. Nothing about this story seemed right or really coming from you.

Damn, Jasmine! Wow, what a story.

More !!!!! So fucking hot

As usual, it was a good story, but not up to her usual brilliant standard! However, there is room for further stories connected to this one. It did dwell on his 9 incher over much I thought. To me, there was not enough build up to the main event? It was all up and over too quickly towards the end product! I am disappointed! It could have and should have been far better!

Wait how big was his duck again? I must have missed that somewhere anyone know?

Hot read! Well done! Definitely has potential to go somewhere if you decide to continue. 5 stars

Damn!!! You out did yourself on this one... Well done!!!

The debauchery was amazing, thoroughly enjoyed this story

To the readers

This was a requested story that I thought was different from my usual. I just read it again and shit I did really overuse the size thing.

On a different note. Sometimes people critique my stories take to long to get to the sex and when I write one like this I get some to think it’s too right to the plot… which I agree is true. That said, this was always supposed to be a nasty sex story and not one full of character development.

Anyways, thanks for the comments good, bad and in between.

Jasmine

A bit different style for you this time.

WTF. Has someone taken up drinking?

Jasmine, another masterpiece. Humiliating assignments is the key to the sequel.You are the very best.

That...was different? Can't sugar-coat it. Pretty terrible. This is definitely a misfire. Gross characters, terrible dialogue, and general ridiculousness.

Unless you benefit from it, economically or mental health wise...catering to others' kinks/tastes/way of life in this type of fashion comes off as desperare and ingenuous. Which translates into the story believe it or not. So its a learning experience I hope you never feel you need to repeat again. Thanks for listening.

Awesome work. Best writing on the site

Loved the story. Was very good. Can't wait to read more of their adventures as they add other people in.

Very well written. Excellent presentation.

Great story, love to see more chapters with these characters.

That was a 9 inch turd. Please recharge your batteries and come back to us refreshed.

So, What I would like to know what were the Criteria given for this project? What were the parameters you were given to stay between?

Amazing Story full of adventure!!

Kinky and dirty. Loved it

Excellent story. Love the idea of having a girlfriend and her daughter, both complete sluts just for me. Love the sharing, the cum swapping of the ladies, ass to mouth and swallowing. Only missing him pissing in their mouths. Perhaps next time! Well done!

i'd give this story a 20 if i could

Different to your normal writing style but still enjoyed it. Could have let the seduction last longer and drawn out getting the daughter involved with a bit more reluctance. Still a 5 out of 5 from me.

Love almost all your stories. This one made me ill. Please don’t write like this again. The Dick worshipping is ridiculous, the arrogance of the guy Who thinks Every woman will give up all of her morals and fuck him with all their holes just because of his dick size is disgusting

I like a lot of your stories, but this one just made me laugh. The characters and their cock worship read out more like satire. Almost seemed like a completely different writer.

You will never please everyone, that's the nature of the world

But there's plenty of people that did like it and I myself wouldn't mind a sequel

He is not A very likable character, in fact he Is pretty disgusting. Not your usual type of man. I couldn't read it all the way through. Oh well, I guess everyone is due a clunker once in a while.

My stepdad would fuck me in front of my mom , he had a horse cock and she didn’t mine me getting some of it , I loved it when he was ramming that cock deep in me and talking nasty to me , I love it when he call me a slut and whore ,

258. Talk about dirty stories. You really outdid yourself this time. The females seemed to be trying to out slut each other.

Repetitive and boring. I'm very surprised, as this author is usually at the top of her game? Disappointing!

Great read, should be made into a movie. cheers.

Wow, that was hot. I am hoping for more chapters with the other ladies mentioned. Grandma and Mrs. Walker should be next!

So amazingly kinky!!! 5 stars

Hot!!!! 5!

So hot and kinky! Would love to see a follow-up with Jasmine and maybe Amanda's Mom. More fillies for his stable.

Maybe part 2 could be illustrated

Great Job again