All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Revenge'

Good story, dialog - up Until the end ...Baddd end!

Seems the author had no ambitions to bring the story to an end.

Really needs more... about the dance and about "Trina's" dance and the boyfriends' reactions

A half told story, why bother?

Then what happened? I gave it three stars because I can see the potential, but you have not finished. There is a lot of conflict, but no resolution. Also, the story really did not flow. It needs to be edited and finished. You have a lot of potential here, just finish it.