All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Sister Comes to Visit'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Premise with possibilities

But the story didn't live up to its potential.

Sex too mechanical. Nothing unexpected. No extended teasing.

Need an editor/proofreader, too.

Gave it three stars.

knuts1knuts1over 3 years ago

Great story. I hope we get to see where this goes.

knowme_ishaknowme_isha4 months ago

20 year and working in IT , leaving in relationship and having Wine at home.. ok done there ..

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