All Comments on 'Girls Camp! Day 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
pregnant squad?

so how many of them got their fertil bodies impregnated from the guides sperm deposit?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
this is good

This is good but i agree with pregnat squad commen but i also think this should go on till he ge all the girlls and they should show up at his college and some be pregnat some not bit all go to that school

wrc264wrc264about 11 years ago
Too Bad you never finished

Start of a good story sequence, but you never got to the other cheerleaders, and especially the lady coach/wife of the guy. Need to come back to this sequence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The stories in this series are a good start! But, your writing style leaves a lot to be desired. It lacks depth and development, and seems incredibly rushed. But again, these stories were a great start.

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