All Comments on 'Girls' Night'

Fantastic. Few errors. Characters all different. You have just got to continue this story. Perhaps a little darker.

Kim's challenge about the next party should lead into some type of a series about a "grand tour" with all of the ladies having their Girl's Nught and including their husbands/significant others (their may be a bi here someplace)

This was well written. I am usually more into the MMF variety than FFM, so winning me over is a good sign. I disagree that it should be darker. I do think that the round robin idea is good.

Wonderful! Fun and playful but sensual and insightful. A worthwhile read!

Sir, I find it intriguing(sic) that a person of your apparent young age could imagine such a hot exchange between six people. I believe that you will have a lot more wonderful tales to tell in the future.

Great story. Love how you brought it around in a totally different way than I would've expected at the beginning -- I first thought it was going to be a bonding between the husband and wife, not the husband and the wife's best friend. Good characterization in such a short piece, and the sex was really hot as well!

Hope you get inspired to come back to this group again.

I read this with a great déjà vu feeling. The same thing happened to me once, but it was in that parallel universe where my happier alter ego lives . . . 5*

The character development was wonderful...each lady was different in action and attitude, as well as appearance. Hubby was just one lucky (and resilient) fellow! Some careless errors...could have benefitted from a little editing!

5*

I'm going to have to try that game at our next party! Great characters, great story!

Obviously any guy's dream -- and even though ridiculous, I don't judge based upon believability; 5*.

Fantasy dream...but did he question himself when the party wasn't in his house what would happen? Would the ladies fuck any other guy available? 3*

These women are bat-shit-crazy. While they are asleep he should pack his things and leave while he still has the chance. Ridiculous story.

Sexy and very nasty.

Fantasy for those who like this genre, again sexy and nasty!

5* from me.

I like weird, especially if it's HOT weird. 5*

Time to start hiding money.

Unless Dave doesn't mind his wife getting gang banged when Kim hosts the next Girls Night,he'd better start getting his ducks in a row for the divorce on the horizon.

Wonder what hubby will think when Kim turns his wife into a gang bang queen?!

What a pack of whores.

It started out hot but this was a setup all the way, from her demanding that he be there "bartending" to the "game" to the neighbor showing up and going last so she was sure to "win". His wife set him up and bad things are coming down the line.