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All Comments on 'Giselle's Private Boutique Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
My opinion

I think you could have combined ch 1 & 2. Together it would have been perfect. Is there a ch3?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
keep going

you handle the build up excellent but just something missing in the sex. Keep trying

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 6 years ago
i liked it, and the build up

I think also it could use more details of how Daniel liked the present, and even hint more about involving Debbie. very good as it is .

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