All Comments on 'Give Him an Inch'

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mark_savannahvisitormark_savannahvisitorover 1 year ago

Hope there is a part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Bullshit. This husband is simply not believable as a character. His wife admits to making out for 2 hours and his reaction is to send the slut back? Unless it's a permanent action. I don't see that happening.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Funny

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Outstanding, can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love to see her pose for photos as his wife or watch her get tricked by next client.

Rw43Rw43over 1 year ago

She has no obligation to go back. If she does, it's not for the business. It's personal.

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I thought you made him a little over-the-top disgusting. Too hard to suspend belief.

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Oh, and she really needs to look at switching to khakis. Much lighter, more comfortable, quicker to dry than jeans.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 Stars, great start. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love these types of stories. Please continue!

JBadams404evaJBadams404evaover 1 year ago

Disgusting,what type of incel are you to wish this on a decent woman ,wtf.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story!

I d make him slightly less repellent (eg breath) and more forceful / blackmailing her :)

Keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like it... I really like the humiliation of it and am looking for more. Nice job! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Round 2 he's ready with some blue power and she gives him at heart attack

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hope there's a sequel!

startech32startech32over 1 year ago

Can't wait for part 2! 5 Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story hopefully you continue it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow when are you going to wright chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

SO for a few criticisms I didn't like how you baiscally kept bumping in the story to say stuff like "see what I did there" no offense but that stuff's unessary also what's the point in adding in the grossness factor if she doesn't mind it then why bother but other besides that? Good story so far keep it up and keep improving

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When part two coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

can't wait for Part 2!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Many thanks!! A really perverted story!!

Thanks and I hope you can continue writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really nice. It's a kind of Japanese weird stuff into the west world.

And I like a lot all this Japanese movies with beautiful ladies doing weird stuff with kimos and grandpas.

Many thanks. Waiting for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Posting for photos sounds amazing. Maybe some selfies together!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, surprisingly enjoyed the nasty element of the dude. Like the idea of him making her dress and pose as the wife etc

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love the Beauty and the Beast theme. Most Hot Wife stories have the wife falling for a young Adonis, but there's something about a "good girl" succumbing to a disgusting, repugnant character which I find much hotter. Her licking his dentures clean certainly fit the bill in that regard.

On a technical note, this really could have used a proofreading, as the errors were a distraction. And I agree with the person who commented about your "see what I did there?", and I'll add about your use of & instead of "and", both of which I found tedious. That said, I loved the story, and I'm looking forward to reading chapter two. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

85 year old widow?

Otherwise v good

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