by IllIntroductionIII
Bullshit. This husband is simply not believable as a character. His wife admits to making out for 2 hours and his reaction is to send the slut back? Unless it's a permanent action. I don't see that happening.
Love to see her pose for photos as his wife or watch her get tricked by next client.
She has no obligation to go back. If she does, it's not for the business. It's personal.
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I thought you made him a little over-the-top disgusting. Too hard to suspend belief.
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Oh, and she really needs to look at switching to khakis. Much lighter, more comfortable, quicker to dry than jeans.
Disgusting,what type of incel are you to wish this on a decent woman ,wtf.
Great story!
I d make him slightly less repellent (eg breath) and more forceful / blackmailing her :)
Keep writing!!
I like it... I really like the humiliation of it and am looking for more. Nice job! :)
SO for a few criticisms I didn't like how you baiscally kept bumping in the story to say stuff like "see what I did there" no offense but that stuff's unessary also what's the point in adding in the grossness factor if she doesn't mind it then why bother but other besides that? Good story so far keep it up and keep improving
Many thanks!! A really perverted story!!
Thanks and I hope you can continue writing!!
Really nice. It's a kind of Japanese weird stuff into the west world.
And I like a lot all this Japanese movies with beautiful ladies doing weird stuff with kimos and grandpas.
Many thanks. Waiting for more!!
Great story, surprisingly enjoyed the nasty element of the dude. Like the idea of him making her dress and pose as the wife etc
I love the Beauty and the Beast theme. Most Hot Wife stories have the wife falling for a young Adonis, but there's something about a "good girl" succumbing to a disgusting, repugnant character which I find much hotter. Her licking his dentures clean certainly fit the bill in that regard.
On a technical note, this really could have used a proofreading, as the errors were a distraction. And I agree with the person who commented about your "see what I did there?", and I'll add about your use of & instead of "and", both of which I found tedious. That said, I loved the story, and I'm looking forward to reading chapter two. Thanks.