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by thegirlinthecrowd

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I like it

Pleas continue =)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please continue. I enjoyed it and it's well-written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Loved it

Please give us more

Aftermath82Aftermath82almost 13 years ago
interesting!

You make a very promising story..but it's too short

LoveBird1929LoveBird1929almost 13 years ago

Very interesting start. I'd love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
interesting

an interesting start. it feels a bit brief, but i'm interested in reading more.

c_angelc_angelalmost 13 years ago
Soon please?

The next chapter is coming soon right? Very interested in what happens.

npiccininpiccinialmost 13 years ago

OK, you've got my attention. Definitley want to see where this goes.

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 13 years ago
I'm in...

LOL, you def got my attention, too! I've got questions all over the place *grin* and can't wait for the next chapter :)

CassieJoCassieJoalmost 13 years ago

Okay, one to the next chapter.....

:)

CassieJo <3

kitten2010kitten2010almost 13 years ago

Great, great first chapter. I will def read the next one. But may I humbly suggest an editor?

Contest4JenContest4Jenalmost 13 years ago

Such potential in one short chapter. Cannot wait to see what you produce next! On to the next chapter....cheers :D

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