All Comments on 'Given and Taken Ch. 01'

Such potential in one short chapter. Cannot wait to see what you produce next! On to the next chapter....cheers :D

Great, great first chapter. I will def read the next one. But may I humbly suggest an editor?

Okay, one to the next chapter.....

:)

CassieJo <3

LOL, you def got my attention, too! I've got questions all over the place *grin* and can't wait for the next chapter :)

OK, you've got my attention. Definitley want to see where this goes.

The next chapter is coming soon right? Very interested in what happens.

an interesting start. it feels a bit brief, but i'm interested in reading more.

Very interesting start. I'd love to read more.

You make a very promising story..but it's too short

Please give us more

Please continue. I enjoyed it and it's well-written

Pleas continue =)