All Comments on 'Given to a Stranger'

I loved it. I have been trying to get my husband to do something like it for me for years.

I knew I should have waited till I was with my other half before I read this!

Damn i want fucked now!

Px

Given to a stranger was your first? wow, nicely done! I hope to see more from you, & I hope it remains as nicely twisted as this one.

Excellently written. Really makes you think about the characters and the scenario. Is it really fantasy? Can't wait for next story. Well done, keep up the excellent work, PLEASE !!!

Great to see such a wonderfully written first story. It will be a treat to read your work as you progress. If they all have the quality of this one, we readers will truly enjoy the experience.

It's wonderful when you read a story where you can relate to the characters. Especially in a first story. Character development in a short story isn't easy, but you got the balance between characters and action just right. Congratulations. I for one am looking forward to more from you.

Enjoyed your story, you got me all wet.

You have made a old man happy and very HARD. I want more please!!!

As a young woman with similar fantasies and experiences, I really appreciate the story. It had a great plot twist and was still incredibly sexy.

Thank you.

Wish I could convince my hubby to give me the same fantasy!!

love the story - very fluid and definitely written by some one who has experienced some of this

Richard xx

... and I like your head. A few glitches, but for the most part well-written. Thank you.

I really loved this story. All the descriptions were perfect

It held my interest all the way through. I like the writing style.

I did guess part of the end though, probably because of past experience.

It's so beautiful, getting inside the head of a literate sub. Thank you.

It is so much fun to find erotica that builds and builds like a sex act itself. Even though I knew the Master would not leave her alone with the stranger, the writing was so good that I was living her thoughts and fears, not what I knew.

That is my fantasy, but no one to help me live it out.