by jadedSHADOW
If only that could be my cock with your mouth wrapped around it! And I would love to have your finger in my ass as you made me come. My imagination is running wild with thoughts of such an encounter.
a_quietguy
Mmm... what a delicious story! The description is so vivid that it makes a man's imagination run... and makes me want to step into that scene.
I really like your stories. I must say that I prefer your third person narrative stories the most. This is a personal preference and not a comment on your writing ability. The third person stories are a little longer and more fleshed out. You do them well. Keep up the good work.
Descriptive, erotic, passionate, arousing...
Well written and incredibly sexy. You see inside my mind as you write about what you're doing to my body.
And it's all so amazingly erotic.
Keep UP the good work and you'll keep us cumming again and again.
Hey Jade, its Nighthawk! I especially like this story of yours. It is amazingly hot and everytime I read it I get so caught up in the passion of it. I have yet to read it once without starting to precum in my pants. My biggest suggestion for your further writing is that you add a twist, much like you did with the strap on story. For example, maybe a specific fetish or clothing involved next time. What would make me happiest would be to hear you read your own storys as an audio file, you have such a great voice for it! I love them and can't wait to see more Jade!
WOW very amazing and vivid description. So hot and bothered right now and very horny. You have such a great way with words... and with bringing a man to cum. Thanks for your little story.