All Comments on 'Giving Him What He Wants Ch. 01'

So what do I say about this!. The story is just what the loving wife category does not need I’m sorry but you in the hay day they might of wanted these types of stories. But believe me at the moment they clearly don’t. These types of stories have stalled the loving wife category is swamped with this type of stories. You have just wasted your precious time writing a story that will probably now only make 15 to 25 likes maybe less . You are a very talented writer but this story is going to be like a virus if you aren’t careful. This has made you look like a complete fool what you should have done before you put your story into the loving wife category is checked the category. I’m not saying you are a fool but the way that you have handled this makes you look like one . If you had checked the loving wife category you would have noticed that there is loads of these types of stories in the loving wife category written by newbies trying to make there mark. And you would probably have noticed what amount of likes that they were getting. That would probably have given you a chance to hold it back or try a different category that wasn’t swamped. But what I have noticed and why didn’t you notice that the stuff you have written ages ago didn’t you know that they were all novels once you write over 4 chapters they become novels. I know this was ages ago but now after you have written this story it’s making me wonder . But please don’t stop writing but at the moment you might want to write something in a different category because while this lockdown thing is going on these types of stories are dead . ( yes I know that the site is trying to get them going again but is failing) . It’s like being fed your favourite food every day 365 days non stop . Until this lockdown is over and people can do what they want. The loving wife category is going to keep getting swamped with these types of stories every day.

Keep writing! Everyone can be a critic, who hasn't written their own stories for posting. I enjoyed your story.

Good job and keep at it.

Fanstastic!! Keep writing more

what an excellent new series. the way you capture the emotions of both the alpha and the husband, absolutely superb!!!!! i can't wait to see what's next. you are my favourite writer of all time and your stories are lengendary!!! Keep writing!

Very good rule of thumb: ignore the one who tells you to ignore people for the supreme crime of having a different opinion.

Good story about a wife that likes being used by big men that are crude and beneath her in status but also don’t take no for an answer. He should have not worried about you being there and taken her into the bedroom and just closed the door when he came for her. Just think how excited you would be hearing her moaning as he conquered her again and again as you listened. She couldn’t say no to an older man who used her as he was entitled to.

Bad taste, in front of husband is still tolerable but in front of her little baby, she have a really perverted taste! The baby will get up from sleep a number of times hearing the moans of his mom and will watch them in action! It will remain in his memory as bad dreams and he will surely suffer from depressive psychosis!

Beautiful Story!

All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Asian Indian women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly like in the Western world.

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This is like my story.. My wife not interested in sex first. 2 years no children first. Then friends father visit and she gave birth to a child. He had very big dick. My dick very small. Now she is a mother of 3 children. Friend's father still visit.

Have been following a lot of Vyasya stories over the years and I am a great fan. This is still a very different kind of story as the husband wife at no point talk about it or at least there is no explicit mention of it. Clearly the better endowed man was seeding the wife and she was allowing it all. Even submitting herself voluntarily. Just thought of providing some feedback. As the comment below struck a chord in me. Wonder if there are many such stories where an elderly man gives a young woman what her young husband can't.

Story is interesting. It makes me think of my dad's adulterous affairs. A few years after my own marriage, I found out about his extracurricular activities. He was boning a young married woman at the time who was even younger than my wife. When I told my wife about her pregnancy, she had a funny smile on her face and seemed amused. I frequently wondered whether he would also father his own daughter-in-law's child.

Like the reviewer below have been following Vyasya's stories.  This story is unique as there isn't much dialogue between the characters. Still it is an amazing story. Some men despite their age and looks, are able to woo pretty, young, and married women. If I hadn't seen it firsthand, I wouldn't have believed it.  During one of my college summer vacations, I accidentally saw my fufaji (aunt's husband) fuck my bhabhi. It was an hour long intense and passionate sex that left a lasting impression. I remember stroking myself to several orgasms during that summer imagining sex with her but she never even looked at me in that way even when I tried to convey my desire for her. I didn't know what to make of the news of my bhabhi's pregnancy later that summer.  Fufaji was staying at our place for almost a month and made good use of our hospitality.  A few years later when the same story repeated again but this time with my wife,  I understood it all. Both the daughter-in-law's got pregnant during that visit and I know for sure my wife got pregnant by him because we were using condoms. Our fufaji was hung like a horse and had been  sexing and impregnating women from our family and relatives.  My wife was only 21 when she got pregnant and it was only 3 months after our marriage. He was 47 at the time and sexed her for a whole month before she got pregnant.  It was utterly humiliating but like a clock work, he helped me father 3 of my children in six years of marriage. Until then we never spoke of anything of it and we pretended to be unaware of what actually was happening.  But out of the blue one day my wife mooted the proposal of having a fourth child and mentioned that we invite our fufaji to stay over at our place.  Fufaji arrived and this time he openly romanced her and slept with her in our bedroom. Things were in the open but he didn't treat me differently but simply ignored my presence and treated my wife as his wife and kept on fucking night after night and after three months, she became pregnant with our fourth child.  She then told me maybe I should write a story similar to the others I read online and let everyone know that all our children were fathered by our Fufaji.

That was almost a decade ago.

Seems like this story is finally seeing the light of the day. I have read this story multiple times and have always loved it. It's similar to what happened to a very close friend of mine. Unlike her I wasn't lucky as her lover was actually none other but my father. She never liked my Abu but I often ignored her remarks about him and told her that she was unusually hot Brahmin beauty, so some attraction was understandable. It wasn't until after her marriage things really took off between them. She told me that my Abu actually raped her and that she revolted but it was all futile as he was too strong and they were at her home and she was alone. Unlike her husband my Abu was a real "saand" (bull) as she said it and there was no going back. She didn't want to compromise with a "pencil dick" when a real bull was available. That's how her affair started with him. Turns out that her husband was a cuckold as well, so he didn't object and only encouraged her and naturally my Abu took advantage of the situation and fathered couple of children with her. She already had a child when her affair started with him.

My Abu is no more, maybe that's why the count stopped at two. She wasn't the only married woman though; he had other affairs and seemed like he had scored with them too. Reading a few comments felt obliged to share my Abu's story.

I had missed some of these comments since I have not kept in touch with this account for a while now. I don't remember where I read this story but it shook me to the core. It was perhaps only 500-1000 words or so, both the parts combined, which I fleshed it out to over 6000 words. Based on the letter they never spoke about her affair with those men even after having all those kids. I wish they had spoken but it didn't matter to me since the episode of my 1st girlfriend with my neighbor was fresh in my mind and we got very close to getting married. Had we married something like this would have happened for sure.

Over the years, I have heard from plenty of readers via feedback that it wasn't as uncommon for a young woman to get pleasure from men in their 40s and 50s and that such extra marital relationships happen quite often. Although, not many conceive from such illicit relationships. Conceiving an illicit child is better down with a person whom the woman bonds with, which mostly is the husband. Although I have heard of tales of women bonding with the bull and conceiving from him even in the Indian context.

Keep those stories coming as feedback. I am sure my readers would appreciate it.