by nicole.matt
Loved the general feel for the story but would have liked a little more of how she felt when she wa being used and also some definition of why she wanted to be used.
This type of story can quickly become boring, but it kept my interest. Thanks for sharing it!
I loved this story. It was a nice touch at the end that the husband had been fucking Julliet while his wife was getting laid. Would love my wife to get laid like this on vacation.
There wasn't much here to like - your basic wife whore, lebenty leven johns and hubbie perhaps off using his fishing rod on another whore. A decent but long suck and fuck without much else going on - kinda likea who gives a damn fuckfest.
You can do better eh.
The young wife's sweetness and submission is handled very well. The sex descriptions were also nice. A nice balance of "cum", "womb", "fluid", "gush", and other sticky words. I appreciate a story with lots of cumming deep inside a wet, dripping pussy. A nice sweet gangbang with a willing young wife with no regrets or bad consequences. Keep your current style and please continue writing, please.
I liked your story: "The Farmers Inn" as well for similar reasons.
as i read this hot stroy I came several times i wishi could be her.
very good story...hot, technically sound, perverse, ...just what I want in erotica
No way would she be interested in old men unless they were rich or had a position of power. Therefore, I rated it 1*.
A truly arousing story
Nicole's flirting and teasing of the old men was subtle and sensual
Excellent story. Drawn out just right, and her reserved agreement to the first gangbang was very sexy. We'll done, write more.