All Comments on 'Giving Lauren More'

Good story I think I have read one like this before

Fucked Up!!!!!!

Andrea needs to get pregnant by Mike, with Laura accidently getting pregnant by the four guys. They the two women and 5 men could move in together and begin fucking each other at will?

Loved it! Will be reading more of your stories soon.

So I stopped reading after several pargraphs, skipped to the end, and rated it 1*.

LITERARY SUICIDE PLEASE A NUMBER 2 SHARPIE SHOULD DO WELL. YOUR STORY LINE SUCKS THE REAL BIG ONE I MEAN REAL BIG HUGE BIG. SHAPE-SHIFT INTO A NEGATIVE NUMBER SO SMALL A SCANNING ELECTRON BEAM MICROSCOPE MIGHT READ THE SCORE.

Congratulations!!!!! Excellent story! :)

Lauren's statement, "What a fucked up marriage we have," is so true. I guess that when Mike gets tired of fucking her tunnel he can dump her. He can find a woman who won't give off an echo when he motorboats her.

This marriage reached its end....Btetr divorce for her to become a whore for big cocks...soon she will need a donkey or a horse to satisfy her...

Fucked up marriage with a cuck and a dirty whore wife.