by rawallace
Fun and interesting read! Like the subdued sexual tension and the quirky plot line. Keep it coming! Will be waiting!!
Hi Rachel,
You are doing great on your sci-fi.
The breadth of your styles is wonderful to see. You switch from intergalactic overdrive to geology (Rock Hound) and back with ease.
Keep it up but don’t burn out.
Another excellent chapter and hopefully not the last one here. Well written and keeps you hooked on a gentle but beguiling story. Surely not the last surprise.
5 stars.