by YKN4949
That was so very hot, I've been toying with the idea of doing the same since I love the way my body looks and feels in woman's clothing. That story have me the courage to go out and do
That was a fabulous story. The lead character seemed so real, rather than a 'fuck doll' that so many stories have just to facilitate sex scenes, that added to the sexual tension especially in the first glory hole encounter - you wanted her to love it and be turned on by it as much as you loved and were turned on by reading.. Great job, thank you.
I do not or I should say I have not had access to stories like this story. I am so happy I found this one because I too have felt as if I lived in shadows as most others live in the light. Sure, I am extremely responsive to its nature as I feel my own pulse race, yet it is so much more to me because it relays feelings I could not describe in open manner.
I am fortunate to have read this one as one of the first stories.
Thank you for sharing your imagination and experiences.
i read the story several. Months ago, then saw it again yesterday and read again, still a splendid read.
This is so much more than pornography, it is a tender, loving and sensitive portrayal of trans-sex and goes a long way towards making it not just acceptable but attractive.
Lovely. The emotional level really rings true, and I'm sure will resonate with TGs from all parts of the spectrum.
Signed on here just so i could leave this comment, moved as i am by this story.
Never thought I'd get so much out of a glory hole story. Seems so impersonal, but this was strangely intimate. Honestly, I rarely read a story here past the first sex scene. I come to get off, and that's fine, so I aim towards the shorter ones: 3, maybe 4 pages. I'm not sure why I decided to even bother with a 9-pager, but I'm really glad I did. This was so much more than just a good stroker -- you made the characters really come to life. You started with the backstory, and I cared about Rose long before we got to the sex. All I can say is: great job! I hope you write many more.
It is/was a very enjoyable read. At first I was a bit annoyed by the back story, but just kept on reading, and soon was immersed in how it must have been to be either Rose or Michelle. Thanks for the wonderful story! :)
Two lonely sad people finding each other. Perfect.
Its fiction I know but I'd love to be a friend and buddy to these two
Great story so well told.
This could be my story, but we're both boys (born this way). We've felt like girls all our lives but, well....
This has to be the best story that I've read on literotica. Thank you.
Nicely told story about love and its inevitable entanglement with the physical side of sex. Well written with a balance of physiology and emotion, your piece addresses many issues we all face trying to find sexually gratifying love and true connectivity within our partners - of all genders. Most of your themes are based on the transsexual, which reasonably would represent the epiphany of challanges in finding a true connection with another and the perfect platform for this topic. I am drawn to your mindset and will read your other works. Best I've read on this forum. A conversation with you must be fascinating experience. Thank you.
Great story filled with emotion and feelings. But, Dude, find an editor. Really. Keep up the great story telling, but get some help with editing.
Your story is so full of hope and love and humanity and really great sex! It is emotionally satisfying as well as sexually satisfying. You must be a very lovely person. Thank you!
Just amazing. Very well written. And I would add that sexuality is so versatile and complex. You may go to www.redtube.com and seek for hermaphrodites. Enjoy.
Very well written and a good understanding of the deep emotional aspects of the situation.
I just have to say that this is one of the most well written stories on this site. It is insightful and has so much depth to it. On top of that it was incredibly erotic and completely and totally satisfying to read. Thank you
I never expected the lovely story you wrote. It was absolutely delightful and I feel so fulfilled emotionally from it. It is rare that you can read something this special. Thank You!!!
An amazing, sexy love story! Thank you. I loved reading this. It pulled my heartstrings and I got off on it too.
Pity about the editing. I know what your note says at the end, but little mistakes do jolt the reader, and make it harder to enjoy. If you don't want someone to make a quick edit of your work, just message me. I'd love to support you.
My only complaint about this story is that it was so moving that I didn't want to sully it by masturbating. ^o^
Wow...keep up the writing. That was one of my favourites - Rose was so real, sexy and loving. Wish I could have been in the end stall!
You know, I started this story a few times and stopped. I am saddened that I waited so long to finish it. Your story is great and it filled me with a lot of happiness. Thank you.
Long but well developed story with a hot ending. Well worth the time.
I loved your story, one of the best I've read. Thank you so much for writing it. I'll definitely be checking out your other writings.
Well developed story. Loved the angst and joy of two lonely souls getting together
I am a male, but enjoy cross-dressing and enjoy sexual encounters with men, women and trans-sexual males. I identified with the naughtiness(and dirtiness) of your sessions with Michele. I had to read the full story in three sessions, but couldn't wait to get back to it. It is well-written,and, although it took a while to get to the real action, it was worth the wait .I hope to submit similar stories soon, and hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoyed yours. Thank you.
This story was wonderful! Sexy and emotional while capturing the bleak world many trans people face; I made tears.
I loved it! I'm typically not one to read angst, but you balanced it out very well with Romance and you made it work...
I relate to Rose and Michele. It is awful to live ones life as someone you have to be other than being who you are. I have lived this double life.
I love everyone of your stories. You actually make the people seem real. An there's actual love an not some one being treated as a piece of meat
Absolutely the single best piece of literature on this site. Your ability to communicate your emotions and thoughts through the written word is exceptional. Thank you.
Could not put it down!!!! Best story I have read on here yet !!!! Loved it!!
Loved the story. Filled with passion and intensity. Simply couldn't wait to read the next page!!!!
The writing, the content, everything grabbed me from the first line to the last!!! I could not stop until I had read every word!!
Thank you sooo much!
Couldnot stop reading. It touched my deepest soul and made me cry of compassion, understanding, memories and bliss.
You created a wonderful story, please keep doing it. It may have been porn...incredibility hot porn, but they found a special love. It was special, thank you for writing it.
This story was so hot I can't count how many times I came reading it. I love GH and will also think that maybe the mouth servicing me is that if a beautiful special girl like Rose or Michelle. So good and well written. Loved it!
This is an amazing story. Feelings both of the body and the heart. Well done, well done.
I really enjoyed this story! It explored something very interesting and for a compelling reason! The revealing moment felt a little strange but led to the porn well which is the idea! I didn't care for the jump straight to love that they had but that would be my biggest complaint. I've added you to my favorite authors list so that I can read more of your work next time!
I do not know who you are but I have never read a story on this site that is so true in so many ways. The plain truth about the walls we build when we are hurt, the need to be loved and to love, the passion and feelings are like no other story I have read. The instant that two bodies become one and more. By far this is the best story that I have read on this site, open honest emotional feelings combined with the pure raw animal sexual drive and passion. The way this is written, the details involved and substance knowledge, it could lead one to believe that this story is true and not a work of fiction. If the rest of your stories are a realistic as this one, I cannot wait to read them all.
This was absolutely one of the best stories I've read in this genre; if not in all. Not overwrought, overly sensational, or unbelievable... but packed with emotion and eroticism. Please...carry on with such fodder! There's plenty of the tired old femdom stuff and sissy humiliation/ turning gay theme. As a crossdresser/ gender fluid person, this is far more in tune to what turns me on!
I love the stories you write. The mix of the emotional and sexual feelings are enchanting. I hope you write many more stories for us to read and enjoy.
Many thanks for the story.
Damn, I've got to say that's one of the best stories I've read on here. Very good balance of back story and sex; it added depth to the story in a way that is often hard to find. The story flowed seamlessly between scenes so that the passion between the characters felt real and followed a natural progression and development. The scenes of passion were very descriptive, but not forced, which I think can be a difficult line to judge. Thank you for writing and I will be reading more of your work.
Truly a great read. I am a man with a feminine side. I have looked at pictures of beautiful transgender women and get really turned on. Unfortunately, your story probably accurately depicts how other people act toward them. I would love to meet an Rose or Michelle. Loved it!
Thank you for enlightening so many of us about the real pain of being ostracized by society. Your style of writing accurately conveys the hurt and despair that those on the outside looking for love often feel. Thanks for opening our minds! Who can hate a lovely ending!
Incredible read. The character development and story line were top notch. The sex was so well written. You've got a skill!!
I hope it is true. I hope that if it is true, you are both still in love and together.
This story very accurately highlights the pain and alienation most members of the transgender community experience. It is rare indeed for a TG woman or man to find a loving relationship in a safe environment, and your story captures that reality perfectly.
But as eye-opening as this story is, it is also heartwarming, and a word of hope and encouragement to never give up. Out of the grimmest of situations, love can develop. Maybe not through stalking, but the story was still a very nice read, and eloquently expressed the feelings of belonging that can come after being ostracized for so long.
Thank you! Please keep writing!
Great story with a great read pace to it. Kind of absorbs us readers into the writings
Well Done!!
I absolutely LOVED your story!! Very well written, and so HOT!! I`m sure people go through this exact thing. I was completely drawn into it. And then I noticied my cock leaking into my underware while reading it. I had to free it and smear the pre cum over the head and start stroking my throbbing cock. I found myself wishing I could spend an evening with you both to feel some of the pleasure you describe. To watch you pleasure each other and then pleasure both of you. To have you both inside me making me beg you to fill me with your hot cum. AMAZING!!!!!! Thank You for writing the story and sharing it with us!!!!
9 pages? I never read a 9 page story. Except this one. It drew me in and made me read on...always wanting more. I felt like I was part of the story. So well written. And hot!
You had me from the first page. Your joy was my joy, just loved all of your story. Makes me want to experience love like that xx
Fantastic story. Really dramatic and drags the reader into the world of the writer. Still smiling after reading it twice.
Loved your story
I'm a trans girl and this story legit made me both cry and cum. I never expected such a well written emotional erotic story. Far too often trans girls are fetishised. This story really made me feel like a part of it, because it's so similar to my actual experiences.
As well as being hot as fuck
Pure emotion and love that can only be felt and expressed by those that have longed for it for far too long! Thank you, I cried, had cum dribbling and bit my lip often while reading!
Thank you so much YKN for the story - I only started reading porn recently after I decided to quit watching it and I never realised it could be so hot!
I confess, i was one of the kind of guys who would have 'fetishised' trans girls, and I've never been sure about the idea of liking stuff with dicks but this really made me think about it - it's ridiculous to label someone like that, if you love them and you want to make them feel special it shouldn't matter what's between their legs!
Anyway, I'm rambling, thanks again for such a passionate, hot, and thought provoking story - I really enjoyed it!
This is the second time I am reading this story. I feel very close to it, like it touches a part of who I am or was. I've met my Michelle and it doesn't matter what gender that person is, but its more about being able to share all of who you are with that one special person. This may have set out to be porn, but you could take all that out, because the meaning underneath it, is what made me come back to this story and read it again. Thank you for sharing!
a lovely story about two lost people which finished with a beautiful ending. thanks for a really good story
"I was (and am) transgendered."
An unlikable liberal trans cunt? How surprising DROPPED.
This story was absolutly perfect thankyou for taking the time to make something this amazing.
As someone who occasionally questions his gender and finds the idea of crossing boundaries both scary and exhilarating... I thought that this was an endearing, well written and erotic tale.
I was really wrapped up in this story. I loved the emotions that the characters experienced and shared. Although I loved the amazing sex portions of the story I loved the overall story just as much. This was incredibly well-written in terms of content and story line. I will be reading more of your work, for sure. Thanks for your contribution to the Literotica community!
Amazing! The only word I have to discribe this story. Ive read a few transexual literotica stories, and this one is my favorite to date. The background behind the protaganist gave the character real depth. I know this is just written porn, but Ive read entire books that had less depth. Five stars.
A great Sunday evening read before bed. Wish I had known more about transsexuals years ago.
this was an engaging and wonderful story! i felt so horrible for the trials the character went through in the beginning, and ended with a feeling of happiness when they discovered each other. please keep writing!
The detailed description and romance is way off the charts. I have no word to explain how explicable it feels reading your story. The sex is no doubt wonderful, but the character development and the overall story-line, easily makes you my favorite author!
Thanks again :)
What a great story and amazing insight into the life of two trans girls.
This one had me pretty interested
I found myself having to read a little at a time while stopped at
Red lights. Good work.
This is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing. It's both incredibly arousing and heart warming.
Mostly I read heterosexual stories of cougars and milfs but this was something new and yet similar, the 19 year old Michele finding a life partner in Rose who was atleast a decade older than her was a big turn on for me.
And the moment when they had sex at Michele's apartment the story made me sooo horny that till the time Rose had made Michele squirt her jizz all around just by ass fucking her, it was too much for me to take in and I came too! Just by reading that! So thank you for this story, I had an absolutely great time reading it.
This took me from a frustrating place where everyone had such a binary view that really emphasized how much it can hurt to hear that, all the way through two people finding love and having passionate sex. This story is fantastic and I can see the payoff from the great buildup.
Awesome love story. Characters are developed nicely. Way to get inside their heads, that's what makes the sex even better. Having had a few cocks in my mouth and ass and enjoyed some great head at a gloryhole makes these stories really exciting for me.
I've been frustrated at the Literotica stories I've read lately. They seemed shallow and two duimensional. This restored my Interest. Great story development, engaging, and beautiful marriage of romance and erotic. Loved it.
Thank you for writing this. It's beautifully written and is a heartwarming story as well. It's a wonderful thing when someone is able to find true love. This is the first story of yours that I've read, but now I can't wait to read the others!
Author did super job of expressing the emotions and thoughts of the transgender characters. Very touching story.
Keep up the good work
That is one of the best love stories I ever read and so erotic as well. Great attention to detail and emotions.
I really like that I forget about time, made me remember that first time with some one just like me !