by chris99999
Great story so far. I like the characters and their interactions. I love the dialogue and banter between them. I always thought that makes the story better. Even though I like reading about the sexual connections, I also like the rest of the story for build up and completion as you are writing a story and not just an in and out.. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.
Just a suggestion...
Maybe some Anal action as well...
Fun premise, well written.
FDD
and its exciting
and hot
juicy
delicious
and those wet cunts seem so enormous through the hole
Well written and very imaginative. If there is a Glory Hole Ch. 3 the characters will have to be taken out of the tavern , otherwise the story will be too repetitive.
I agree a slight change should be in order like he slips and calls his sister chloe when his mother and sister know that her real son/brother is there
Simon should jokingly setup a gloryhole in the house to use with Charlotte, and let Judith and/or Chloe find out about it. When Charlotte wants to use it with someone else, things get mixed up and Judith and/or Chloe ACTUALLY do it with Simon for real at home.
...for me, besides what happens next, is when will Simon ever get to fuck either mom and/or sis face to face without the Tavern?
And what will happen if Charlotte ever finds out about his "bar hopping"?
As a resident of 'Sin City' I approve of this factoid:
"Hi Simon. I have an interesting fact. Do you know the expression, 'What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas'?"
I nodded.
"This clever slogan was actually the product of a marketing campaign by the Las Vegas Convention and Visitors Authority, shortened to LVCVA."
Somewhere in 'Sin City'