All Comments on 'Glory Hole Ch. 02'

by chris99999

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very good story. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My 2 cents

Great story so far. I like the characters and their interactions. I love the dialogue and banter between them. I always thought that makes the story better. Even though I like reading about the sexual connections, I also like the rest of the story for build up and completion as you are writing a story and not just an in and out.. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.

FuddyDuddyDudeFuddyDuddyDudeover 4 years ago
He needs to fuck his Boss...

Just a suggestion...

Maybe some Anal action as well...

Fun premise, well written.

FDD

lorencinolorencinoover 4 years ago
Its different

and its exciting

and hot

juicy

delicious

and those wet cunts seem so enormous through the hole

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5*

Well written and very imaginative. If there is a Glory Hole Ch. 3 the characters will have to be taken out of the tavern , otherwise the story will be too repetitive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One of the best

Great writing and a new to me at least scenario

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I agree a slight change should be in order like he slips and calls his sister chloe when his mother and sister know that her real son/brother is there

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chpt 3

Simon should jokingly setup a gloryhole in the house to use with Charlotte, and let Judith and/or Chloe find out about it. When Charlotte wants to use it with someone else, things get mixed up and Judith and/or Chloe ACTUALLY do it with Simon for real at home.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The big question...

...for me, besides what happens next, is when will Simon ever get to fuck either mom and/or sis face to face without the Tavern?

And what will happen if Charlotte ever finds out about his "bar hopping"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter 3?

Dear Chris99999, when can we expect Chapter 3?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I need him to go on a date with the angel face beauty in chapter 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
AWESOME

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 4 years ago
Stellar

So good can't wait for a chapter 3 keep up the great work

Taste4UrLustTaste4UrLustabout 4 years ago
I’m hooked

This is great

bshell47bshell47about 3 years ago
I am lost ?

Good story, but a little confusing

LickabletreatLickabletreatover 2 years ago

Great story! One of the best I have found. Keep up the good work!

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

As a resident of 'Sin City' I approve of this factoid:

"Hi Simon. I have an interesting fact. Do you know the expression, 'What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas'?"

I nodded.

"This clever slogan was actually the product of a marketing campaign by the Las Vegas Convention and Visitors Authority, shortened to LVCVA."

Somewhere in 'Sin City'

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