by chris99999
It all seemed too good to keep being simple. It will be interesting to see where you go.
Top notch. You have a great gift. I can't wait to see more of your work with this series. If you keep it going (please keep it going lol). Untill the next chapter be good
"I didn't like that last bit, and I didn't like it that she had called Rick from the airport, but hadn't bothered calling me."
Dude cares about a call then his boss,girlfriend,mother and sister working at glory hole.
And why didn't he said His boss about jim, but told jim about boss?
Very good!
I have some thoughts about Victoria. Being a boss is a corporate firm, Victoria must be a very smart woman, who is also very attractive. She just happens to have a higher-than-normal sexual drive. It's obvious that her husband is frequently not at home, and did not satisfy her sexual needs.
Victoria craves for sex so much so that she doesn't mind working in the glory hole, as long as she gets to sample lots of cocks.
I do hope that in future chapters, Victoria can be portrayed as who she was originally in earlier chapters:
A smart, attractive woman who secretly craves for lots of sex.
and not just a brainless bimbo slut who is addicted to cocks.
I have to admit that I did not see dad coming in at the end! great writing and on to the next chapter for me
I am so sick of starting a story and it never gets finished. I am not reading no more story's unless they have an ending.
Father and Daughter and neither knew.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Will either find out?