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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More!

This series has yet to disappoint. Keep it up, mate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Another Great Chapter keep it up m8

ocaladouglasocaladouglasover 4 years ago

wow loved it and the twists that you keep throwing in. keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Make Ann's Mother develop a strong desire for Simon's cock, to the point where she would beg him to fuck her. Simon simply replied that if she wanted his cock, she must do whatever Simon wanted her to.

Ann's Mother, unable to control her strong desire for Simon's cock, instantly agrees. Simon began giving her instructions, just to test her boundaries on sexual kinks, such as wearing revealing clothes for him, calling him Daddy, applying for work in the Tavern backroom simply because Simon ordered her to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
so far so good

Very creative so far. I like it that you can go a ton of different ways with the story!

feelgood2000feelgood2000over 4 years ago
Loved it!!

Loved the twist with the change in ownership and the father fucking Anne

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 4 years ago
Love the story but...

It's starting to feel redundant. I think one more chapter where ALL is revealed and the story is wrapped up. I know what I'd like but it's your story not mine. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
But what of Simon's father?

Simon's girlfriend works at the Tavern.

Simon's Dad goes to the Tavern.

Hmmm.

smifffy1004smifffy1004about 4 years ago
keep going

keep going so need to see if he gets to fuck Anne's mum. So wish a tavern was near by

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Mary's and jenifer's identity......

Reaveal the identities of Mary and jenifer (Simon's cousin).......great strory and twists.....keep going bro🎉💯💯💯

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Over?

This feels like things are just hanging in the wind. If you are still out there, finish this with a sense of purpose and give us closure on a well written story.

Bear_TrainerBear_Traineralmost 4 years ago

This can't be the end!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Need more

Hope to see more chapters in this story. Keep up the good work.

DUBLXLDUBLXLalmost 4 years ago
More

The way you write, this story has to continue. So many surprises, just a request for you to continue their erotic journeys.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MORE.....CONTINUE THE STORY!!

...YOU CAN'T STOP NOW! This is an excellent story, your writing is excellent, just the perfect amount of sex and non-sex, and the great changes in the story!!!

CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!

cursrahcursrahover 3 years ago

please will you continue this story?

ManoBlueManoBlueover 3 years ago

This boring cuck

bluerowdybluerowdyover 3 years ago

GOOD JOB!!! MORE CHAPTERS, PLEASE........

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MORE!

Keep at it. Great story, well written. But it feels unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
keep going!

hope chapter 6 arrives soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
we need more

please continue, love to read they al know the secret

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Stories

Very enjoyable stories. I like to think of all stories here as taking place back in the 60s when there was no such things as AIDS/HIV or any of the other deadly shit than is just waiting to kill us. One thing I wonder though, how come there is no voice recognition?

Family members ought to be able to recognise family voices...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MORE!!

We need more!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I would love to read more and like it to be a long series

bshell47bshell47about 3 years ago
What a family!

Hope you will continue.

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2almost 3 years ago

I loved the story!! Really want to see where things go with the two families. I hope you get motivated to continue this one.

BTW, I could not be Simon, I would have been too jealous, but that's me.

And Daddie must have known that he had been with Anne.

Anyway, I hope you pick it up again. As always, thank you for sharing with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

We need lots of continuation of this story. It's too fucking good!!!!

nashman1000nashman1000almost 3 years ago

It's been quite some time since you wrote this, so I assume you are not going to continue it. That's too bad. I really enjoyed this story. It would be interesting to see 5 more parts. Please continue it. The main character is interesting, as is everyone else. I really enjoy your writing style as well.

cursrahcursrah11 months ago

wish you would continue this story. I really enjoyed it.

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