All Comments on 'Go-to Guy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
good :)

look forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great start

Love the control, left hanging for the next encounter!

ShyMaleSubShyMaleSubover 7 years ago
More Please!

I love how playfully dominant she is. From start it seems she is in total control even though he doesn't yet realize it. The age difference aspect is so intriuging. It's only briefly noted at start and not made a huge point, but you know it's there throughout the story. Great job. Give us more, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Need more!

Please don't wait too long to write the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great first chapter, realistic and exciting

Nice to find a well-written and literate story that skips the usual cliches. Her calm dominance and his natural submission are more exciting and open-ended than the usual femdom fantasy, it will be great to see this develop.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Count me impressed

Logical flow of events.

Logical motivations for both parties.

Charisma and charm beautifully demonstrated by the woman.

Only downside is that you can already see how this relationship is going to eventually end, but it will still be a thrilling ride for Marc. He will feel an amazing high.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Delightful premise.

Great preliminaries. But barely a beginning.

Five stars, even so.

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