by Flagrante
I love how playfully dominant she is. From start it seems she is in total control even though he doesn't yet realize it. The age difference aspect is so intriuging. It's only briefly noted at start and not made a huge point, but you know it's there throughout the story. Great job. Give us more, please.
Nice to find a well-written and literate story that skips the usual cliches. Her calm dominance and his natural submission are more exciting and open-ended than the usual femdom fantasy, it will be great to see this develop.
Logical flow of events.
Logical motivations for both parties.
Charisma and charm beautifully demonstrated by the woman.
Only downside is that you can already see how this relationship is going to eventually end, but it will still be a thrilling ride for Marc. He will feel an amazing high.
Delightful premise.
Great preliminaries. But barely a beginning.
Five stars, even so.