by TrampsAnThieves
A nice ending to a fun story. Lacked a little. It in drama, but it was still nice. Didn't love the bits with Bish - I'm not into sharing like that. I assume, but it wasn't stated, that Zack was the only one with all of the main women except for Bish?
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The epilogue felt a little too check box for me - it would've been nice to have a bit more emotion, and a bit less list of facts.
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5* for me
Wonder how big Dev will ultimately be? If the one can shift into Dev's cat type maybe she can translate for it? Reav and Dev could end up quite a hunting team. Both ambush predators in their own ways. A future story could have Zack meet his elf father. Tales of their goblin city, villages and mixture of residents could have reached him and others who might be related to their royal family members. This has been a good story. I'm sad to see it go but look forward to anything else you choose to write.
Love it, love it, love it. Another great series. Can hardly wait for more, more, more…
You obviously had a story in mind and a direction for it to go. It was interesting. As usual it is well thought out. I just don't like most series. I need to make a program to keep track of the characters. To me, the closer you get to the end the more it loses it's power.
Sad to see it end but i thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this story! As others have mentioned, there are numerous plot hooks available for future stories... Hint Hint!
I absolutely loved this story so much, that I just couldn’t stop reading until I finished it. Very well done! I’m hoping you will arc another story out of this.