All Comments on 'Goblin Queen's Plan Ch. 06'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now5 months ago

Wonderfully told tale of a fantasy world. 5 stars!

shadrachtshadracht5 months ago

A nice ending to a fun story. Lacked a little. It in drama, but it was still nice. Didn't love the bits with Bish - I'm not into sharing like that. I assume, but it wasn't stated, that Zack was the only one with all of the main women except for Bish?

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The epilogue felt a little too check box for me - it would've been nice to have a bit more emotion, and a bit less list of facts.

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5* for me

HelgamiteHelgamite5 months ago

Perfect ending for an awesome story!

5/5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Wonder how big Dev will ultimately be? If the one can shift into Dev's cat type maybe she can translate for it? Reav and Dev could end up quite a hunting team. Both ambush predators in their own ways. A future story could have Zack meet his elf father. Tales of their goblin city, villages and mixture of residents could have reached him and others who might be related to their royal family members. This has been a good story. I'm sad to see it go but look forward to anything else you choose to write.

YdontuYdontu5 months ago

Loved reading the entire series. Excellent entertainment!

Coochielover71Coochielover715 months ago

Love it, love it, love it. Another great series. Can hardly wait for more, more, more…

gunmakergunmaker5 months ago

You obviously had a story in mind and a direction for it to go. It was interesting. As usual it is well thought out. I just don't like most series. I need to make a program to keep track of the characters. To me, the closer you get to the end the more it loses it's power.

skippersdadskippersdad5 months ago

Great story, very good ending. Thank you for sharing.

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew4 months ago

Sad to see it end but i thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this story! As others have mentioned, there are numerous plot hooks available for future stories... Hint Hint!

ogiver3ogiver33 months ago

I absolutely loved this story so much, that I just couldn’t stop reading until I finished it. Very well done! I’m hoping you will arc another story out of this.

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Wonderful story!

Mike R

ender2k2kender2k2k19 days ago

Outstanding story. Thanks so much

TomNJaxTomNJax17 days ago

Excellent work, immensely enjoyed it!! Thanks for sharing!

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2024-04-23: Dude fans -- your patience has been rewarded. #6 is queued to show up 4/25, #7 on 4/26, and cross your fingers that #8 is right behind. BTW, things are heating up with Sam/Emily/Lena, so I've moved the series from Mature to Incest/Taboo. The cheating is also a ...

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