All Comments on 'Goblin Under The Bed'

Creative, fascinating and bizarre! Delightful!

fault. I. could. find. your. sentences. are. too. short. It. makes. it. hard. to. get. into. the. story.

Loved this story! Truly bizarre and erotic - excellent!

I actually voted on this one a while ago, but just noticed the dickhead anonymous comment.

Maybe if you stopped blinking your eyes so much, you'd find it easier to read? what a dick

Great story and congrats on the E!!!! ;-)

Your story deserved an "E." It was a page turner(well you know what I mean.) I stumbled on your stories and I will keep reading. Good work.

This was erotic, horrific, quirky, and very well paced.

Great story! Well written, very unique (from anything that I've ever read, anyway), a bit gross, and sexy at the same time.

Very nice.

it was engaging and but it needs a sequel with possibly a new family

You have the sexual areas right, but the psychology of the piece is weak. I suggest focusing not-so-much upon the reasons for the goblin's existence, as deriving concentration to the reactions of characters experienced. That way, your story may unfold at its own pace, instead of being dissected during its composure.

Love the object of the goblin, by the by. Keep writing.

Really enjoyed this. Was a bit worried about the goblins penis but you thought that out. Enjoyed the twist at the end. Keep it up!

the story had no goal, what was it about ,a husband thinking his wife likes the dog that doesn't make a good idea

I did not see the ending coming! Poor doggy.

Excellent writing! <3

bit too rapey for me