by GoblinFan69
Wow! I've got to admit, I wasn't expecting to ever see the continuation of this story! I sincerely hope we don't have to wait another year for the next chapter!
This is my favorite genre, and you've got a super interesting story on your hands here - I can't wait to see where you take it.
I stumbled on your story today and I am glad I did. This is an excellent tale! It has a great balance of detail versus action and sex versus plot. Granted, the sex is more sexy than porn so far, but I really like that the story isn't drowned by a sea of minutiae or an ocean of graphic sex. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!!
Came across this and was very surprised at the detail, story telling and effort put into this story. Please keep them coming just more regularly. Good work
Would the village not jump at an opportunity to get passage back to their homeland? They can't trust the emmisary but it's better than trying to fight them. Just a plot point that I think needs adjusting.
I read this story and have have lost myself in it! Its so entertaining it should be a movie!!!!