by GoblinFan69
And now we wait another year after this excellent example of a cliff hanger
My 2 cents
A better chapter. You are fleshing out the characters and making them (and the story) more interesting. I like the story plot. Thanks for your time and your imagination.
I have only just discovered your story and I'm enjoying it greatly. Goblin girls are a weakness for me and can only dream of being in Jesse's situation. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
I really hope you release a new ch soon and add abit more naughty parts into the story also
First part was promising, the second cemented it! Like the bon mots sprinkled through the dialogue in addition to the story concept and writing itself
This is a good story so far. If you were to pick it up again I'd love to keep reading.