All Comments on 'Goblore Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

And now we wait another year after this excellent example of a cliff hanger

RazzakelRazzakelalmost 3 years ago

Looking forward to more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My 2 cents

A better chapter. You are fleshing out the characters and making them (and the story) more interesting. I like the story plot. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That was really good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm completely invested now!

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984almost 3 years ago

Great continuing look forward to the next chapter.

JzznJzznover 2 years ago

I have only just discovered your story and I'm enjoying it greatly. Goblin girls are a weakness for me and can only dream of being in Jesse's situation. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

chipmonk9chipmonk9over 2 years ago

I really hope you release a new ch soon and add abit more naughty parts into the story also

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Looking forward to what comes next!

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Excellent Start!

11/10 Crossbow Bolts!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story can’t wait for the next part hoping it comes quick

Polly_DollyPolly_Dollyabout 1 year ago

First part was promising, the second cemented it! Like the bon mots sprinkled through the dialogue in addition to the story concept and writing itself

NeverwrongNeverwrongabout 1 year ago

It's a shame you didn't continue this, was very good.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Heyyy gob!

Two more years of waiting?

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is a good story so far. If you were to pick it up again I'd love to keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

and another story bites the dust

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