All Comments on 'Goddess in the Family, Ch. 01'

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chuunichuuniover 1 year ago

Fantastic! Looking forward to reading the next chapter already! Keep up the good work!

KallamezKallamezover 1 year ago

More! Write more please!

MadMausMadMausover 1 year ago

A wonderful story. If I could I would give it six stars. You may not have gone into the colorful details and vivid descriptions as some other stories, but I loved the way you brought the characters to life. I can not wait to see where the storyline will go next.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 1 year ago

A very up-lifting beginning chapter, Viktor is blessed with the world's best girlfriend, and a Goddess for a Mommy, ... And boy oh boy, does she ever know how take care of her 18-year-old son. More please, this was so very 'yummy!" ;-) TTFN

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 1 year ago

Not usually my cup of tea, but wow ! !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love this! All my favorite tags here 5/5. Only request (not a complaint) ... Can the sex scenes last longer? It makes sense that they get right to it, since it's the first time, but maybe afterwards they move around more? More positions, descriptions, dirty talk?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't wait to read about the party

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I hope you continue this story

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Must! Have! MORE!

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