by cdofan
Fantastic! Looking forward to reading the next chapter already! Keep up the good work!
A wonderful story. If I could I would give it six stars. You may not have gone into the colorful details and vivid descriptions as some other stories, but I loved the way you brought the characters to life. I can not wait to see where the storyline will go next.
A very up-lifting beginning chapter, Viktor is blessed with the world's best girlfriend, and a Goddess for a Mommy, ... And boy oh boy, does she ever know how take care of her 18-year-old son. More please, this was so very 'yummy!" ;-) TTFN
I love this! All my favorite tags here 5/5. Only request (not a complaint) ... Can the sex scenes last longer? It makes sense that they get right to it, since it's the first time, but maybe afterwards they move around more? More positions, descriptions, dirty talk?