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by RTM
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Anonymousabout 5 years agogood story
One of the best stories I've read on "Literotica" can we have another?
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoGood story, but please edit
There was a lot to like about this story, but it was marred by lots of grammar and spelling errors. Pronouns were switched, wrong words were used. Please have someone do a thorough edit of your work. It will elevate a good story to the next level.
Anonymousover 2 years agoIt was a good story over all. You should write more of it with more kinks and taboo.
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