All Comments on 'Going Down?'

Hot. Definitely one of the better backdoor stories I've read here recently. I'll have to go through and read your other stories.

Not exactly my thing that you wrote the leading lady, Portia, as becoming dissinterested/unfulfilled during the session, and hoping for a quick ending ... but still fun nonetheless. It's always unconventionally hot when a girl declares her preference for butt sex.

As an aside, your story reminded me of something. Years ago, back before the woman I married was still my girlfriend, she requested some impromptu backdoor fun while in an elevator at this small bank where I worked maintenance, as it was our ongoing thing to get it on at the various places I worked back then. We thought we were alone after hours, had shut the elevator off between floors, but when we returned to the lobby there were a few employees waiting to get on! haha ...we didn't get busted, although it had to have been obvious what we were doing.

loved the story..give us more soon

Liked the build up and generally well written, but several spelling errors were distracting: 'rye' is a cereal - wry is the correct spelling, as is topiary, rather than the spelling used. Nit picking I know, but it does distract and annoy some people - not just a pedantic old tart like me!

Portia,

Great stories !!! I enjoyed all of them! I have one favor to ask, tho --

Please , please come back to the US of A, so I can spank and fuck your glorious ass!!!!

Tom

Very sexy story from all perspectives! The characters are sexy but, realistic. Must be the gifted author.