All Comments on 'Going Down a Slippery Slope Ch. 02'

you must carry this story forward

Thanks for taking the time to weave a 2nd chapter. I enjoy the slow build up.

Take care

It's refreshing to read a Lesbian story written by a lesbian, more about a loving relationship than Wham Bang Thank you Mam. Keeping writing these characters.

BUT.... first off you use but too often, using a comma instead would help the flow of the story. Also you could tighten the story up a bit, it's a little wordy in spots. Maybe try and find someone to edit for you, I have found a second set of eyes really helps my stories. Though a lot of readers don't care about the writing style, their more interested in graphic descriptions of sex, I think as a writer my self that I always want to improve my stories. I hope you will take my comment in the way it's intended, to help you tell you're amazing story in a readable way.

Keep writing, and improving.

Who hasn't had a straight crush and wished this would happen!

I liked the pace of it, was a bit surprised Erin decided to take it to the next step already, but understandable once those feelings of lust take over :-)

Please post a chapter 3! Super. Loved it! 5 stars!

... just loved it :)

Looking forward with great anticipation to the next and subsequent chapters. I love the romance, the love that you give these stories. Much better than some others who go straight to the sex. Yours is a very erotic and pleasing, satisfying?, writing style. I guess that this further proves that only a woman who's been there can truly capture the romantic magic.

This was lovely, thank you. I had to go back to chapter 1 and read it again first. I hope you will write more chapters? ~ L

This is such a very lovely story! I love their sweet innocence and all! I'm now looking forward to chapter 3 and see how their love story progresses!

You're a great writer, by the way. Thank you for making such a story! <3

Keeep going!

Please make a part 3 on this one! I super duper love this storyline! :((((

waiting faithfully for a ch. 3 :)

Where is chapter 3? Waiting................

After reading this, I found myself wanting to know more about how things turned out for Kim and Erin. Hoping for a happily ever after ending. If you do ever continue this story, I hope they will find happiness and bliss for the long haul! Excellent story!

Your craft is quite good. I really enjoyed this story. It is easy to feel the risk that each of them are/were taking, because you captured it so well.

It is stories like this one that contribute to my staying up too late. I tell myself to not start a story with Chapters, but then, like the characters in the story, I find myself on a slippery slope. Well, it was well worth the time.

Thank you for sharing your talented writing and imagination.

Oh, and if you are considering it, I join the throng of fans who would welcome Chapter 03. As determined as Erin is, her loving of Kim would surely be worth the read.

please please please make a part 3 of this or write some new!

It's been a looong time already n we miss u.

Thank u for sharing though! :)

"ok, you little bitch eat my pussy. I need it now"??? Where did that come from? Nothing in the story would lead the reader to believe that was in Erin's character to say.

I enjoyed it

Will you be giving us more please . As with your other stories, this is also very compelling. Please give me more.

I've read this series several times before, and it is still as good or better than the first time I read it. Thanks for sharing!

And it is still a wonderful story! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Two very good chapters ...

Kim got lucky after being patiently awaiting erin’s awakening …. And “satisfaction “ smiling happiness …. So sweet so cute …. Love and happiness it is

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