All Comments on 'Going Down a Slippery Slope Ch. 02'

Kim got lucky after being patiently awaiting erin’s awakening …. And “satisfaction “ smiling happiness …. So sweet so cute …. Love and happiness it is

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Two very good chapters ...

And it is still a wonderful story! Thank you for sharing it with us.

I've read this series several times before, and it is still as good or better than the first time I read it. Thanks for sharing!

Will you be giving us more please . As with your other stories, this is also very compelling. Please give me more.

I enjoyed it

"ok, you little bitch eat my pussy. I need it now"??? Where did that come from? Nothing in the story would lead the reader to believe that was in Erin's character to say.

please please please make a part 3 of this or write some new!

It's been a looong time already n we miss u.

Thank u for sharing though! :)

Your craft is quite good. I really enjoyed this story. It is easy to feel the risk that each of them are/were taking, because you captured it so well.

It is stories like this one that contribute to my staying up too late. I tell myself to not start a story with Chapters, but then, like the characters in the story, I find myself on a slippery slope. Well, it was well worth the time.

Thank you for sharing your talented writing and imagination.

Oh, and if you are considering it, I join the throng of fans who would welcome Chapter 03. As determined as Erin is, her loving of Kim would surely be worth the read.

After reading this, I found myself wanting to know more about how things turned out for Kim and Erin. Hoping for a happily ever after ending. If you do ever continue this story, I hope they will find happiness and bliss for the long haul! Excellent story!

Where is chapter 3? Waiting................

waiting faithfully for a ch. 3 :)

Please make a part 3 on this one! I super duper love this storyline! :((((

Keeep going!

This is such a very lovely story! I love their sweet innocence and all! I'm now looking forward to chapter 3 and see how their love story progresses!

You're a great writer, by the way. Thank you for making such a story! <3

This was lovely, thank you. I had to go back to chapter 1 and read it again first. I hope you will write more chapters? ~ L

Looking forward with great anticipation to the next and subsequent chapters. I love the romance, the love that you give these stories. Much better than some others who go straight to the sex. Yours is a very erotic and pleasing, satisfying?, writing style. I guess that this further proves that only a woman who's been there can truly capture the romantic magic.

... just loved it :)

Please post a chapter 3! Super. Loved it! 5 stars!

Who hasn't had a straight crush and wished this would happen!

I liked the pace of it, was a bit surprised Erin decided to take it to the next step already, but understandable once those feelings of lust take over :-)

It's refreshing to read a Lesbian story written by a lesbian, more about a loving relationship than Wham Bang Thank you Mam. Keeping writing these characters.

BUT.... first off you use but too often, using a comma instead would help the flow of the story. Also you could tighten the story up a bit, it's a little wordy in spots. Maybe try and find someone to edit for you, I have found a second set of eyes really helps my stories. Though a lot of readers don't care about the writing style, their more interested in graphic descriptions of sex, I think as a writer my self that I always want to improve my stories. I hope you will take my comment in the way it's intended, to help you tell you're amazing story in a readable way.

Keep writing, and improving.

Thanks for taking the time to weave a 2nd chapter. I enjoy the slow build up.

Take care

you must carry this story forward