All Comments on 'Going Down Ch. 01'

Super story, this is my fantasy, I can't wait to hear what's coming!!!

Oh wow, this is such a great story. I actually started to read slower when I realized that the story was nearing the end. Please continue, and hurry if you can. This story made me tingle in all the right places

eagerly await the next episode

Wow, that certainly whetted my appetite the next chapter. Congrats. :O)

opening sentence and then went up hill from there. Interesting, hot without being crass, building characters wonderfully to that ending where you can't wait to find out what happens next. Stellar job.

Warm, sweet, hot, sexy, romantic. Who could ask for more?

Very nice start. I could feel the electricity between Cale and Grace.

My GAWD, you've done a great job of setting the stage! I'm finding this very hot, positively electrifying. Fantastically good!

To read your work. Excellent setting and building of tension, characters that are real and almost tangible. You have definite style and skill, Script.

I won't be a stranger to your work any longer ;)

add lust, hook-up and a fling....means WOW. TK U MLJ LV NV