All Comments on 'Going Down Ch. 02'

I've read the first and this chapter, so here is my honest review...

Plot - Good. Well thought out plot with realism. The first line itself will draw you in to read more.

Quality of the story - Very attention grabbing. Lots of intelligent dialogue. Flirty and even naughty. Note, it's naughty not smuttily trashy.

Grammar - One or two mistakes that was very acceptable. Everyone can miss it. Not damaging to the content at all.

Eroticism - Definitely erotic. Absolutely a hard-on.

Overall - It was worth reading even the second time round.

Thank you for a wonderful sweet romantic story. Looking forward expectantly to your next chapter.

more please, this is really to good to stop readying .thanks for writting it .

Second chapter not quite as good as the first, but still worth reading.

I can't wait for the next chapter! And i like that you didn't make fans wait too long for the 2nd chapter... I hope that is a pattern you plan to keep following! The story is amazing and you have earned a new fan!

More soon! Please!!

I'm melting! I hope you'll continue with this series, Scripto. It has just the right balance of sex, story and fun. I can't wait to see what happens next. You should be very proud.

Excellent romance. Beautifully written. The guy's a bit too perfect, but the girl is just the right mix of soft and sassy.

add a roof, you have a building. TK U MLJ LV NV