All Comments on 'Going Home Ch. 01'

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armywife2009armywife2009almost 14 years agoAuthor
I know theres no sex!!

This is a series i am trying to start, and no there isnt any sex in the first few chapters but i plan on it being kinda long. I know there are spelling errors, i think i used the wrong plain, over and over and month is must. So other than the no sex i would love to know what you think. Thanks :)

pumpkin77pumpkin77almost 14 years ago
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This story has a very good start I can't wait to see what happened to Johnny!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

so far i'm hooked! can't wait till the next chapter.

Marbles29Marbles29almost 14 years ago
Great

This is great already..I cant wait for the next chapter

tbelle2010tbelle2010almost 14 years ago
intresting

I can not wait to see where this goes!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
My review

Okay so I'm reading this, and it is very good. Don't take offense, but I have only one question. Is he gay or is the "Love" just like a brotherly sort of love?

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 14 years ago
Oh wow!

Can't wait to see who Luke is and what is going on! Talk about grabbing your intererst right off the bat!!

armywife2009armywife2009almost 14 years agoAuthor
Response to Anon.

Are you asking if Johnny is gay? If so yes. So is the man, Leslie from earlier and the mysterious Luke. Hope I helped

Sleepyhead18Sleepyhead18over 11 years ago

It's ridiculous the number of times I've read and re-read this series

12readnwrite12readnwriteabout 11 years ago

I second that Sleepyhead18... I lost count of how many times I re-read this story... on different computers and phones... Love it...

armywife2009armywife2009about 11 years agoAuthor
I love my fans

I love you guys so much!!! Thank you for the wonderful feedback yall make my day. I have writers block right now still. If anyone has any ideas they would like me to explore please feel free to send me feedback i love suggestions and ill send you one of my budding stories for feedback :) Thanks!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The first chapter is very well wtitten. We know the main characters already. The narrator will not be able to say No to Luke...

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I don't know why this series doesn't have good ratings. It's one of my favorites.

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I love this site, I've been a writer for years but I'm so shy about my stories it's not even funny. I love the category gay male and bdsm because men seem to have so many more romantic stories than any other category.

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