by armywife2009
Ok I love your stories but I'm dieing to see luke and jhonny back together other than that just keep writing your amazing. ( ;
This story is hot, intense, complicated yet so straightforward. I absolutely love it. I'm committed to these characters and really care about what happens next. Keep up the amazing work.
i love reading about johnny and luke and their history together. i'm happy that you gave leslie his own partner as well. and johnny's mom rock :) pls update soon. i'm seriously addicted, lol
Can a story get better than the one you are telling of these two? I cannot wait to see what happens next. Please continue soon. Please. x
that was so sweet and romantic, who know a drug dealing killer could be so sweet? and i agree that it is nice for leslie to have someone. i still dont understant his complex relationship with johnny and luke and maybe thats why i dont like him very much, so some enlightenment would be grand! but great chapter! cant wait for more!
I'm glad Leslie has someone of his own. After all, his "affair" is responsible for Luke and Johnny going out on Friday! :o) Hot. Interesting. Can't wait to see what happened to drive Johnny away in the first place. Also can't wait to see how you resolve the deal with the fake Mafia dude, Luke's murderous deeds and the fact that he was so abusive (physically and mentally) to Johnny.
that was such a great part of the story, I sure hope those two make it!!!!! there is so much love between those two, who cares if they r drug dealers they need love to. please hurry with the next chapters
ok the person who put the anonomous agreed coment asked every thing i was gonna ask so all i have to say is pritty pritty please with a cherry on top post the next part as fast as possible. i am 100% in love with your story and i think it is the best one on this site so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST SOON thats all [ ;
Do we have to wait again?? pls pls pls pls pls drop the next chapter.
luv ya!
I agree with others...please dont make us wait too long! This is a wonderful series and I cant wait for the next installment!
Ok to set some things straight
Ok there are some strong opinions that I want to address. First, Johnny is a hometown boy he is not fancy. Luke got him a plain silver band because it represents Johnny as a person he doesn't want a fancy gold ring or anything like that because that's just not him. Despite how much money Luke has but I appreciate you all being so concerned about him :D. Second. Johnny boy is a nickname that Luke gave him, Leslie uses it as derogatory and that is why in the very beginning he expressed that. By no means am I insulting johnny's masculinity by calling him that it was just a loving nick name that Luke gave him. Thank you all so much for your wonderful feed back good and bad keep bringing it I love being told the things I miss or your confused about or want. Thanks!!! More soon!!
That makes sense it was bothering me for a while now the jhonny boy thing. Thanks for clearing that up just one more thing how dose Leslie have 80 lbs of muscle on jhonny if jhonny is about 200 lbs sorry but it bugs me when people get the math wrong. I know I'm a freek. Please write soon I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part
Are u gonna post the next story soon? I really love this story please post soon please please please
Are you going to submit the next part soon. I'm going crazy just waiting for it. Your work is amazing and I know that what ever you post will blow us all away; can't wait for the next part.
Sorry last semester of school slowed me down, its submitted you'll see the next chapter soon! Don't hate me for the ending i promise the next chapter is totally worth it you'll see!! thank you all!
Seriously need an editor.
Prediction: A not so happy ending. We haven't even gotten to the issues that cause Johnny to leave. Its a bad relationship with dangerous criminal activities thrown into the mix as well. I can't wait to read more, but I'm not expecting a happy ending.
Seriously get an editor... Sometimes its hard to follow because of grammar, punctuation, and shady details (like when in the hall Johnny catches the end of the rant of Leslie's about Luke not knowing... took a while for that to be figured out because it was worded so weirdly).