All Comments on 'Going Home Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What about night out? (Ch.5)

Luke said: "You and me are going out Friday. There is a new bar in Fairngton, and I want to show you around."

**armywife2009** will you tell us about that evening out?

And what exactly Leslie and William told Joe, that got him so scared?

armywife2009armywife2009over 13 years agoAuthor
Hasnt Happened yet

Date night hasnt happened yet :D The current day in the story is Wednesday, chapter 5 was Tuesday, and Chapter 4 was between Sunday and Monday. As for what Luke and William said, it will be revealed, promise. Johnny is to nice of a guy and we all know it, im sure he'll talk to the guy :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This is it!!!!!

This is one of my all time favorite stories!!! I get all tingly and excited when I see an update. More, more, more....and thank you...lol.

seriouswriter12seriouswriter12over 13 years ago
*sighs*

I love the dynamic between Luke and Johnny. Good thing Leslie is out of the picture now and happy with someone else :) Pls update soon *hugs*

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
good chapter

Sounds like there is trouble brewing with this Mike guy again. I got a kick out of what Johnny said before movie night started lol!! That was cute :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Anticipation

Can't wait to read the next chapter, I hope you post it soon. I really hope Luke and Johnny get a happy ending.

NikkiflNikkiflover 13 years ago
Nooooooooooo

Why just why that has to be the worst cliff hanger so far grrrrrrrr post the next one soon I will go crazy if you don't post the next chapter right away. Please post it some time in the next seven days por favor please

Araya313Araya313over 13 years ago
Argh!

Way to leave a cliffhanger! Please please please hurry with the next one! Also, how many chapter will there be?

armywife2009armywife2009over 13 years agoAuthor
Chapters

Im not sure how many chapters there will be im just writing and itll be what it is lol I cant really predict it but i know were almost done. A few more twists and turns and you ll get your ending :D Thank you for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
your killin me!!

But I love the story...keep writing :)

Contest4JenContest4Jenover 13 years ago
GAH!!

oh man why did you have to stop there! the suspense is going to kill me and then i won't be able to read the rest! i LOVE the story though :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love the Story!

Hope the next chapter comes soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh My God

Its like a train reck and you just can't look away. I hate stories like this and I just can't stop reading it. Its just mean and Jonhhy is so stupid. I love your other stories and really hope you write more like them but this one is just mean!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
can't wait

OMFG!!! I cannot wait for the next installment! NOW NOW NOW!!! ahhh - this story is too yummy. i seriously don't know what to do while waiting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hi

Just want to know if u where gonna post ur next story any time soon I hope so I truly enjoy these stories hope you plan to post soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

You're killing me armywife2009 !!! It's been over a month now !!!!!!!

Please pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase add more :-)

NikkiflNikkiflover 13 years ago
I hope ur fine

I hope ur ok and u haven't posted because ur on vacation or something because it would be awful if you decided to stop writing. Hope u post soon I love this story. Oh and dose the next one have some Luke / johnny sex action? I hope so. I wish you well

armywife2009armywife2009over 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks guys I'm not gone!!!

The next chapter is to be submitted tommorow and to answer some questions and concerns I'm fine just been having a few.... Issues In life recently. Next chapter being turned it tommorow then it's up to literotica how long it takes to post!!! Thank you guys so much and yes more sex to come :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Sick story

You sur hav a lot of weird characters, they are highly neurotic as well - just remembering that Johnny (the weirdest of all) wanted to protect Leslie and William by telling Luke - who considered Leslie H I S? How stupid can Johnny be? Dont tell me - he is not even close to his potential of stupidity!

armywife2009armywife2009almost 13 years agoAuthor
Eh

I appreciate good and bad comments. My characters are my own, i will make them who i want them to be and they are either loved or hated. Thank you all for all your comments :D I personally love Johnny, Luke, Leslie, all of them, for their stupid drunken ways :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Exactly

I'm sorry but some of us here looooove Johnny and Luke and the rest of the crew! People aren't perfect, they make mistakes and bad judgements so why should characters be any different?

If you want a story a certain way, maybe write one yourself?

Great work armywife, I swear I've read this story a million times!!!

armywife2009armywife2009almost 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you annon!!

Your comment just made my day thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
oh puhleeezzz!!!!!!!!!!

if you cannot give constructive criticism, pls shut ur mouths!!!!! its amazing that you r complaining, wen u took the tym to read the story all the way to chapter 6. this story is absolutely fab...love all the characters....Good work armywife2009...u r brilliant...dont mind the silly comments of meanies....:)

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