All Comments on 'Going Home for Summer Pt. 01'

A very good start, but it lacks the background development of the characters that you have given us. Plot is good and very believable with the father and girlfriend. Looking for to the next chapter and what cums about

Love the story. Can't wait for part 2.

This is well written, it is real and will only get better........nice job.

Is it Emily or Jessica?

Teaser!!

I need part II now!

I gave you 4 stars, not for content, that was worth 5. I just hate being left hanging with such short chapters. **pulls hair out**

Definitely a great start! Can't wait to read more

make the chapters longer. If each chapter is over a page then people will vote higher scores. Most don't like one page chapters, they just start to get into the story and then it ends.

Who's Jessica?

Really hope you add to this. Nicely done!

What a great start. I can't wait to read what happens. Any idea when the next chapter will be posted?

Yes, very HOT and arousing !! Quite a turn of events and hopefully after Emily and Alice kissing; they'll go play at Alice's so being naked; they can make out and get each other off. Emily should ask Alice how long she has been screwing James ?? Maybe, Alice will wear very seductive clothes with Daddy and ask him how long he's been screwing Emily ?? Hopefully, Em does Daddy and all 3 do it during her semester break. So much potential. Thanks.

What happened to part 2?

Where is part 2??

This was great and I want to read the rest

Can’t wait for the next chapter when Alice talks to Emily and her Dad.

Exciting!

Good writing