All Comments on 'Going to the Fair'

wow hottest story I have read in a long time

Please continue writing your stories are very good. Thanks for writing.

At first I was not sure I wanted to read all four pages but by the second page I realized that four pages were not going to be enough. This story was one of the best I have read on this site!! Good luck with the contest :) And PLEASE keep writing.

Kami:

I won't be able to ever go to a Renaissance Festival without thinking about this story. Good luck in the contest!

I love it. It was def hot. Keep it up