All Comments on 'Golden Rook Ch. 55-60'

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Wildwood55 about 2 years ago

The repetition needs to be fixed. There were passages & paragraphs, verbatim, in triplicate. I see what you were attempting to do, show overlapping events in a timeline, but virtually cutting & pasting scenes is NOT the way to accomplish it.

At one point in this chapter, I thought I had somehow opened a previous chapter, already read.

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Constructive criticism and suggestions are always welcome. Please do bear in mind it takes a little time to get things edited and approved! (0 currently pending) Flower Wine, Torgan Wine, and Kros Voyeh all take place in the same world. As far as events go, the order is Flowe...

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