All Comments on 'Golden Silence'

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Jorel1455Jorel1455almost 18 years ago
Words cann't describe it

Wonderfully erotic - just shows that talking is not all that necessary to get exactly what you wish for. Keep up the great writing and make the next one longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Paragraphs way

too long to make reading this worthwhile.

WinkWink19WinkWink19almost 15 years ago
Good Job

Like was said previously, shorten the paragraphs. I almost didnt finish because of the length of them, its distracting. Good story though, well written.

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