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All Comments on 'Goldilocks and The Three Bears'

by Cromagnonman

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William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Well done

Makes more sense than the original version.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ok

Started off good but seemed to rush through the sexual activity, not enough details!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
JUST THINK

ALL OF THIS OVER A BOWL OF PORRIDGE. tk u mlj lv nv

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Will be looking forward to the sequel...

...where the Bears and Plod bring a *civil* suit against G for getting the clap from her...

CajunBillCajunBillover 11 years ago
In 1837 ?

Nice to know that we had DNA and Women's Crisis Centers when the original was written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Who Cares!

What a piece of crap ! It was aweful Please dont write any more stories at all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great

I thought it was a good and comical twist on an old fairy tale. I enjoyed it emmensly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow!

Amazing! Well done. It's really well written!

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