All Comments on 'Gone'

I really like this. Your exploration of how it really must feel to the dominant is refreshing and presents a touch of reality, but in a loving, beautiful manner. Keep writing!

This is a great start, I am looking forward to your next piece. 5*

Love it! You had my full attention from the first line to the last. Sexy & loving...the build up is just divine. Don't be tempted to skip down as the beauty in this really is the build- slow, sensual and very hot!

Incredible story. The words, the building rhythm - all of it. Just wonderful.

Love this story so much. I want to be the girl in this story!

Beautiful.

Excellent. Your pace and timing are wonderfully erotic.

Succulent & sensuous! Plus a big help to those of us women who find it hard to let go. Love everything about it except the typos, lol!