All Comments on 'Gone to Kansas Ch. 02'

just wished the chapters were a bit longer. Loved it.

You are doing a great job on this story, I'm hooked.

You have a great story going, I am looking forward to the next chapter. The writing is good, my only comment is that he seems to be a very excitable guy because you use quite a few exclamation points.

Great chapter!

5

I have really enjoyed your tale and keep looking forward to the rest of the story. Judging from the comments other readers feel the same. I have to agree longer chapters would be good without making your tale boring

Excellent, well told story.

Looking forward to seeing the next installment.

Great story can't wait for more. Five stars!

Yes. Enjoying the story. Fascinated by the American West

Looking forward to more chapters.

CINCO ESTRELLAS SO FAR...BUT.....YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS ONE!

When will you finish the story

No idea, when it will be finished. Just do this in my spare time, also the holidays are coming up, not to mention deer season!