All Comments on 'Gone with the Wind'

I enjoyed this story. Not 5 stars, but 4 stars, so still good. I see that some commenters were unhappy that Dave didn't take Lisa back after her "mistake". I have to wonder if those commenters have never been cheated on by their wife. I am not saying that a marriage that has infidelity cannot be saved, b/c I absolutely believe that in many cases such marriages can heal. However, TRUST is the basis of any intimate relationship. If you don't have trust, you won't have intimacy. Dave character felt he would always doubt her. The setup was that Dave knew she had a wild past, that she had asked him about swinging, and the tried to encourage interest in a threesome. Then he watches a video of his wife in flagrante delecto. People can heal trust after such events, but is it really a stretch of the imagination that some people are afraid to set themselves up to be hurt by the same person again? Especially when Dave doesn't know if it was a one-time thing, he just knows he caught her once, and she lied about it until presented proof she couldn't lie out of. I have been in the situation where you wonder how many others there were and you just finally accept you will never know for sure, b/c you can't trust that person. So, yes, the story is entirely believable that he would end his marriage after finding out that the person he put on a pedestal did not do the same back to him.

My thoughts largely mirror trance00 from a couple years ago. Also can’t really comprehend how in the span of only a few months Lisa’s children barely regard her as their mother anymore. Story was well set up and thoughtful despite Dave being a caricature, and then Lisa ultimately becoming one as well. But the last couple of pages strained realistic credulity for me. Beyond this story I think I am really struggling with the ostensibly strong principled MC, but in reality they are weak because they go nuclear over one ( albeit serious ) indiscretion. Ten years of damn near perfect marriage is worth more. She asked about swinging you said no what’s the BFD? He never tries to reach her and help her explore her restlessness. He doesn’t care. She cheats once, he doesn’t want to know why. Just it’s over. ( then he traps her see trances comments below). Sorry Dave you really are a prick. So are you going to leave Amanda too when she fails you by questioning anything about her own nature ?

Pretty clear the six months separation was a last ditch effort and a test that Lisa failed miserably. Her asking to swing and for threesomes along with the passive-aggressive manipulation, laid the groundwork to rot their marital foundation. Then the gangbang was over the top. She reverted to her prior slutdom after recovering for 11 years or so. Hard to get past that video. But I believe if she had actually been repentant and taken the separation to NOT screw around, he might have taken her back. But she blew it completely. And for the most part her sex life those six months was objectively terrible plus the STD. Even Paula dumped her. What a slut. Sad.

The psychology and motivation amount to: Oh, she’s a slut. And makes for a boring, unrealistic Femdom agitprop.

To all the married ladies out there, just keep in mind if you value that your husband is actually faithful to you, you'd best understand that the same is important to him as well so you better return that favor or risk loosing it forever.

"So too had gone all of our problems. We had nothing but clear sailing ahead of us and we lived happily ever after"

The auther literally told us the whole story is a fairy tale. Afterall, who could write these inane characters unless of course it was a happily ever after fairy tale. 1/5

It's funny because Lisa is a fictional character but she typifies the woman speak vs man speak narrative.

Actions, reactions and consequences.

History of mankind. (Those who fail to learn from history....) sacred texts?

Prolific writer.

Another bunch of s...t drivel coming from another anonymous reader. I think some of these folks r just jealoys they can put to words together to make a sentence. Agai i for 1 really enjoy the syory line n characters. Pls continue to keep up the good work n kno it was enjoyed n appreciated.

TBH , lisa is about 50% of most women

What the fuck!?!?,? Why would you have to choke and prime an electric chainsaw? Stupid!

5/5 Great read. More evidence that SS06 is one of the best.

OK, you had me till the new kid's name.

Nope, the usual never ending drivel from this author. Terrible characters, terrible story.

Lisa is written as too stupid to breathe. I couldn't suspend disbelief. If she were a male character, she'd be about as believable as "Snidely Whiplash".

Fucking hilarious! What a putz! A real noobie loser!! What, does he think that this "new", second-wife whore isn't going to turn into as big if not bigger slut whore than his first wife?!?! HAA HAAA HAAA! This one's a lot smarter, and much more devious! He won't have the slightest idea she's been fucking around on him until the third child she was with him comes out nappy haired and black as the ace of spades!!

Even the second time around, boy scout will never see it coming!!! It's just too funny. The Divine Comedy lives.

Nice story. Thanks for sharing your fantasies with us.

Ed

Total bullshit ! All the characters are sickening and their actions are incredible ! 1*

Great story well structured and in your usual style. Please continue to write with the same gusto.

I was really disappointed in this one. Neither of the Original characters acted in a consistent manner. "Super husband" kicks wife to the curb without discussion. "Contrite wife" goes ape-shit after learning gang bang isn't what she wanted. (???) I started skimming early looking for a coherent story. Why would cuckolded men fall for the cuckolder's wife? Always??

A LONG STORY THAT COULD HAVE BEDN SHORTENED ONCE THEY GOT DIVORCED YET UNNECESSARY FOR THE 6 MONTHS FOLLOWING!!

MARK WAS A BASTARD FOR HIS OVER DRAMATICS WITH DAVE WHEN HIS SLUT DAUGHTER CALLED THEM OVER!!

LISA, ONCE A SLUT ALWAYS A SLUT!!

This, like all of your stories, is far too long. Filled with bs and descriptions that are completely unnecessary. Too many characters. Too much jumping around. Completely boring!

5 Stars on this story .. Keep up the good work .. I love the name they gave the youngest One .

For all of you morons referring to what happened in the storage building as 'rape', have you forgotten that she had TWICE attempted to talk her husband into opening their marriage? Sure I'll admit that fear of death brings out the aberrant behaviors people lock away to fit into polite society, but as a divorced combat-veteran I can attest to the fact that GOOD people don't break their wedding vows just because things got scary. Lisa was a classic cake-eater looking for an excuse and even AFTER getting caught couldn't shed her urge to have her cake and eat it too. It's not like this is completely irrational behavior, society just doesn't like to admit that women can be cheating asshole, just like men. My ex-wife acted so much like Lisa I couldn't stop myself from seeing the Ex as I read about her, because even after getting caught the Ex couldn't stop herself from chasing the magic-dick. It took her being broke and homeless to try coming back and admitting she'd wronged me and even then she insisted she'd never stopped loving me.

Not a good story but well written. Story really didn't make sense. The author started to write Lisa as a thoughtful but not intellectually intelligent women and towards the end she turns into some sort of mindless bimbo. Steve, Lisa's husband, sits on the most horrendous video of Lisa being effectively gang raped and does nothing about it for two weeks before saying anything. Got the feeling the author started to write this story and just couldn't stop it even though it was getting ridiculous.

I usually like your stories, but this was too weird. Most elementary school children do not take naps, especially when there is a houseful of angry people. Did I read that right? Did the husband actually offer to pay for his cheating wife’s divorce lawyer? The six months trial period to let the cheating wife explore was ridiculous & made no sense.

I know the author tries to paint the wife as “wanting it” but it was effectively a gang rape of a vulnerable woman. Then the husband shits all over her.

......fools ends up hanging themselves by their own stupidity, even by a slap or slaps in reality most idiots are to slow to learn till it’s to late and while rarely, some do learn. The foolish sadly are gluten for punishment and there’s nothing anyone can do to save them from harm again it’s rare but the exception do learn eventually, but even more rarely in time. Over time however, the heartache and heartbreak do heal and the scars left behind are lessons learned on both sides of fence. 5 stars !!!

I agree with Anonymous 04/23/20. The end of this story is logically inconsistent with the rest of it. The wife got into a bad situation and made bad decisions, but seems to regret what she did and seems to have found a new appreciation for her husband and children. She seems desperate to save her marriage. Then her husband makes her a stupid offer he never should have made, basically a trap, and she jumps right into it like a completely brainless bimbo that is too stupid to be believed.

Why would the husband offer her six months to do what she wants? She already cheated. If he didn't want to stay married to her, why not immediately divorce her? If he wants to save the marriage, why not do something constructive like counseling? Why set her up to fail? And for that matter, why would the wife, if she had two neurons to rub together, accept a six months split if she wanted to save her marriage? I cannot believe in a character so dumb that she can continue to do for six months the exact thing destroying her marriage and believe her husband will be stupid enough to take her back. An obvious trap is avoided, not jumped into.

I really liked the story up until the six month separation. It had an interesting and original premise and was well written. I didn't mind the length because a story should be as long as It is, at least until I got to the logically inconsistent part. I don't know whether the author was so in love with his preconceived ending that he couldn't see that it didn't fit or whether he was trying too hard to please the BTB crowd, but I hope the author keeps writing because the author definitely shows promise as a writer.

The story was good until the 6 month time before the divorce.

Lisa's actions after that point are a complete break of character. There is spent a lot of time and effort in making her affair be under pressure of death and fear, and in making her regret what she did. She spends time feeling bad and comfirms her love for her husband. It is said that she just want to be forgiven but then starts fucking anyone out of nowere. She doen't have a reason, she doesn't even want to do that, but she does. It is like the author don't care anymore about the character created and just want to make her seem like the most awfull bitch that ever existed on earth. Even while she goes mindless fucking anyone who walks it is said that she isn't liking what she is doing, but she continue, her actions don't make sense and aren't explained.

You are the only author in LW that consistently leaves me intensely disliking the male protagonist and (usually) leaving me in sympathy with the cheating wife.

She cheats on her husband with several men, lies by omission by not telling him and basically blames everyone but herself for what happened and you seem to think he overreacted by wanting a divorce? He gives her a final chance to see what she'll do by being separated for 6 months and what does she do? Reflect on her marriage and her cheating? Try to get closer to her kids? No. She goes out and fucks as many men as she can to decide if she wants a husband or lots of dick. She rachets her slut level up several notches and she (and, apparently you) thinks he should just take her back because that's what SHE wants. You're as delusional as she is. A good 5* slut burning.

Dave was ready to forgive and go on. Counseling must have really helped him get past Lisa's and Steve's fear fuck. All she wanted was to get her marriage back.

She renounced all intentions of ever "exploring" after Dave killed the 3-way offer. She was truly repentant over Steve, and doing the best she could with the very reasonable expectation that Dave knew nothing.

Then they both compounded the felony by lying to each other. Dave's failure to confront Lisa early on lets both share the blame. I assume the counselor showed them the way out of the mess their mistakes made.

So Dave offers Lisa 6 months to explore, and Lisa steps into the Martian Slut Ray beam and goes crazy. Why he even made the offer is beyond me.

She has no motivation to date others period. All she had to do to recover her marriage to swear everlasting loyalty to Dave.

A couple more paragraphs, maybe living a pure life for 6 months under full observation, and everything could be happy ever after. Would have been a wonderful story. Romance: love lost and found.

SrangStar06, why did you so suddenly jerk your character 180 degrees?

Was this an odd week where the woman has to be self destructed and laid low into the gutter? I like BTB stories, but this was not meant to be one!

I Think Lisa and My Ex are really good friends ..

I guess I am feeling really good this morning, I gave you 3 stars. Don't know why, to long, to much repeat telling the story by different people. Certainly not realistic to human behavior. You say Lisa felt bad and hollow after she was used by Steve and the guys but when given 6 months to " get it out of her system " she continues to act out in the most destructive way? Doesn't make sense.

Mark is going to just sleep in the bed with Amanda? What is he 7 years old? I realize this is just fictional dreaming but there is a saying, if it doesn't make sense it's not true. None of this made sense.

Way too long and have you ever read a good story told from the point of view of different writers (characters) ? Crappy...….. and so much recrimination that it is pathetic hence the 1 but it could have been quite good!

LOL

**I** happen to be a liberal socialist Democrat, and I find the cheating wife's Behavior and the cheating husband's Behavior, that would be Lisa and Steve, to be reprehensible, horrible, damaging to their children, and Unforgivable. Why do you think that liberals or any less devoted to marriage and our vows and conservatives? There are quite a few interesting studies that deal with marriage stability and political beliefs. Take a look at a couple of them. There's one specific one from a letter in the New York Times, the paper of record for the United States of America, that takes into account Regional factors, economic factors, and social factors. Included in social factors are things like religion of course. An interesting thing it turns out is that in the Deep South, family structure among conservatives is in a shambles. However in the Midwest, especially moving to the north and west in the Midwest, which I imagine means states such as Minnesota, Michigan, Wyoming, Montana, and Idaho, marriage is much stronger among conservatives than in the Deep South.

Another interesting element of the whole political marriage stability thing is why stable marriages are stable in different political families. Among liberals, It generally has to do with economic factors and marrying later in life. Among conservatives, the emphasis is more on the simple sanctity of marriage. In either case though, I think you have to agree, a stable marriage, whatever the cause, is a good thing for any children involved. I think that transcends all political boundaries.

The editing was better than many previous stories. There were no repeated phrases, and no use of site instead of sight. However there were still misspellings that should not have happened. Also a couple confused sentences that I had to make my own assumptions about your intent.

Closet cucks love many stangstar stories.

Speaking of communications, you need to work on your reading comprehension

skills.

He gave her the choice to prove her regret for her action or to choose the whore option that she chose, two days later. From her previous attempts to drag him into swinging, he knew that she'd seal her own fate.

He never intended to take her back.

She freaked out during the storm ... true... but she knew what was happening and wanted to do it... KNOWING that she'd be cheating on her husband. She REASONED that he'd never find out so she took her panties off and went all in. What Liberal Socialist Democrat excuse would you like to make for THAT, Anonymous 01/02/18? Stop trying to avoid the simple truth, you air-headed moron. The slut DECIDED to cheat and got CAUGHT. She's just lucky that one or more of her fuckers didn't give her HIV and a cocktail of other std's.

Why IS it that people who've cheated on their partners are always SO certain that their disrespected, insulted, soiled and irreparably damaged marriage relationship is 'completely' savable? (A good question that Anonymous 01/02/18 should answer... even though SHE misspelled savable.) Why are you morons so FAST to condemn the offended partner for getting on with their life and doing what living that life entails? (ergo... meet and eventually put the meat to and impregnate the tight pussied, much bigger cock loving, soon to be ex-wife of the cheater that he had the video of HIS ex-wife fucking. .... big inhale)

Question for YOU, Anonymous 01/02/18...WHO'S AT FAULT THAT IT HAPPENED?? Everyone with common sense can see that, if his ex-to-be hadn't fucked the husband of the pussy that he met, fucked and got pregnant, there never would have been a video because he never would have met, fucked and impregnated her and she wouldn't be getting divorced. Too logical for you? Take a deeeeep breath.... really put your heart into it... pull as hard as you can and, just maybe, you'll be able to get your head out of your ass. ... If you're successful and after you've wiped the shit off of your eyelashes, you'll see that once she broke their marriage contract, the marriage was null and void so stuff your bullshit excuses, blame transference and phony accusations.

4 stars from me

Well written, with different POV.

Still, I can’t help thinking that their marriage was completely salvable, if only they’d been willing to communicate better. As you showed in her POV of the events in the storm, she had not set out to cheat— she’d freaked out and was taken advantage of by a group of slime balls. If she had been able to explain to her husband, and if he’d been able to listen and forgive, your story would have been shorter but the ending better. Marriages should be ended only as a last resort. [His marrying a seven-month pregnant Amanda immediately after his divorce came through is proof positive that he was equally willing to violate his vows.]

Enjoyed the story.However, do look up the meaning of "abject" in the context you have used it.The same word appears in another of your stories - same context.Nonetheless,five*'s,

would be nice if the wife hadn't had to be an all out slut for him to make a firm decision to end the marriage.

He had a right to the same degree of faithfulness he gave.

just the right length for a story this detailed .

thanks again for another really great story .

You wove Dave & Wendy Thomas in the same story as Charles Xavier's school for gifted yoingsters. I tip my cap to ou sir. Another fine tale.

can't stand more than 4 pages of ss06 long-winded boring crap

Huh! Another one I like.

But the way that woman went from one-time mistake to delusional train wreck was difficult to get my head around

you are lucky if anything is left, no matter how much you care. TK U MLJ LV NV

StangStar ..sings again the same ballad of a highly sexed and pathetically stupid woman , who needs all our sympathy and pity rather than our hate and scorn !

this one wasn't at all special Scotty

This wife just might take the cake for a stupid, stupid Stang wife. I don't care how scared she was, but to forget her husband and her daughters to let 4 different men use her over and over again and let another take pictures. This is STUPID with capitol letters. She had no excuses, she wanted to cheat and so she did. She was building up to cheating and this just gave her a chance. Then if I had 6 months to try and win back my mate, I wouldn't even be in the same room with someone of the opposite sex, not screwing everything in sight. Plain and simple, the husband should have dumped her after her storm adventure, he didn't need the 6 months. Thanks for the story.

cheating, anony-mouse just before. Her fear just allowed her to strip back the cover she had put on her real persona. Cover had already started to blow up with the little puffs of wind when she wanted to swing and then the threesome.

Rhetorical question: How can someone with children become a swinger? The kids will surely find out. How screwed up would they become behind all that?

Story is pretty good. It fits the LW category to a "T". Lisa wasn't inebriated during the storm so there's no real excuse for fucking four strangers or even one. Just because a guy has a hard-on pressed to her belly doesn't mean she has to screw him unless she IS an uninhibited slut. Fear of the storm? Horse pucky. Cheers!

good story, another one o those tales with hidden depths that few seem able to spot.

although in many places the story was more of a wet, smelly, silent Fart...

"frankly i don't give a damn" coz i still enjoyed it.

Dave & Amanda shoulda given Lisa enough money to start up a tiny landscaping company with Steve.

Steve is only good for using a Hoe ,

Lisa is only good at digging deeper Holes & an expert at having holes filled.

would have been a perfect solution

:)

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

(5 star)

why ? coz i feel obliged to support my fav Authors.

:)

i think you made too much of a point, that lisa had learned her lesson about being single and being free before dave gave her the 6 months to be single. I don't think from a logical story standpoint at that time that she would have taken it with all the regret and saying she only wanted dave. but other than that great story as always

I looked up "stupid bitch" in the dictionary and there was a picture of Lisa Thomas. LOL

I can cut he SOME slack, given her mind set, falling into Steve's arms when she was in deathly fear during the storm, but as soon as she saw they had an audience she HAD to stop! No way should she have let the others join in, and why she didn't go grab that cell phone defies all common sense!

In her defense, though, maybe someone should have made it clear that the 6 months was really to get her head straight, not to m"try out" being single.

Let's see......

Dave (I sell burgers) Thomas - awesome husband and dad - dumps all over a wife who basically was raped in the middle of a storm / tornado with the act instigated by a serial seducer / cheater.

Lisa Thomas - wife in an idyllic marriage- mentally shuts out the act, cant understand her husbands attitude, then once confronted drops 100 IQ points and agrees to pursue swinging.

While entertaining (the quotes / character names / etc... ) this one was a let down.

Someone needs to take Dave's 'stang away. He doesn't deserve one. Give him a Camry.

The guy totally perfect, the woman a total caricature.

As always it was well written

BUT I have to say that this time I am a bit less convinced that Lisa was the all bad - she made a huge mistake and gave in to urges that she normally did not even consider - except with Dave, She was trapped and scared and overwhelmed - then got carried away.

Not good - no excuse - BUT an explanation - there is a difference people.

It did not seem like she ever wanted to be anything but married to her one and only - she never did things with the thought ot intent to deceive or hurt she did try to do what she though Dave offered - she was too dense to understand what is really was but that is not a crime She did deceive Dave by not going to him and confessing - not many people have the strength to do that though. Then we make her the bike every one rides and her life disintegrates - I am unconvinced she deserved that.

But as always I love the story and your characters - the end is rushed as you are want to do - tied up loose ends all over the place quickly - but that is fine.

Thank you again and again for your sharing and your time -

There's this massive storm, high winds, flood waters, tornadoes, falling trees, a woman trapped between a fallen telephone pole and live wires. Except for one or two stupid comments over several years she and her husband have had an idyllic marriage. Then ensconced in a very dimly lit storage facility with a menagerie of men this terrified strung out woman ends up being gang banged, and the whole thing is recorded. That very day the husband sees the horror of the storm, the damage to his wife's car, and also a telephone video of the gang bang. The husband immediately goes to his occasional thoughts about her occasional, but rare, comments. He concludes, even in sight of the mayhem caused by the storm, his wife is an amoral worthless whore. Not once, not one time did this man consider what she'd gone through or what impact it might have had on her psyche. What does he do; he listens to an unhappy and angry female victim of a serial cheater, then he calls a lawyer. Then he gives his wife the shaft.

What kind of heartless cold blooded bastard is this? He's certainly not the man he's painted to be. The man's supposed history and his behavior are totally incongruent.

Lisa gets the shaft. Poor Lisa.

Stang somebody should pour Draino on your paint job.

Capra feel to it,not the wife of course but the husband and wife to be.

Certainly seeing your wife gang banged can kill all feeling you have for her, but his reaction did not communicate that kind of impact. In order to kill all feeling, you have to experience great pain and turmoil - unless he didn't have much feeling for her to begin with. Again, pre discovery I just don't see it.

Up until the epilogue I was thinking this was your best. The ending seemed rushed and a bit over the top. While the last few years of their marriage had challenges (I.e. her asking to swing, asking for a three way), there wasn't any real indication that he didn't love her or that she was a bad mother. In the end, she was an absolutely horrible person with little sense in her head. He moved on very quickly. Granted, what she did was unforgivable and he was right in divorcing her. However, he very quickly lost all feeling for her, as did the kids.

"I'm not charging you for destroying my marriage, since that was on the rocks any way." The "on the rocks any way" needed better development.

I didn't care for your stories the last couple of weeks, BUT this was outstanding! Keep on writing. For those that can't get over the minor errors ---- GET A LIFE

Oh boy .Finally got to see what all the shouting was about.

Well, like Gen. Hood you SS06 gave a great effort. I hope you didn't lose a limb. Unfortunately Atlanta still burned. And so should have this story.

Sometimes the longer story is not the better story. Heh, live and learn.

How about more Star City ??

A Merry Man

Dave Thomas and his daughter Wendy.....cool.

A truly hilarious story about quite stupid and selfish people.

Wow!! Your stories just keep getting better and better! Thanks!

after the cheating part all she wanted was to be with her husband again

but then he suggestets she can fuck anyone she wants and she agrees just like that ???

not a good story

your main female character is a lunatic

I can only add my devoted thank you and "we'll done" to all the existing comments. Thank you and I look forward to your next story.

I love reading ALL your stories!!!! I get excited every time I see a new one, kinda like a kid on Christmas morning!!! Please don't EVER stop writing!

And not a single alien. Except maybe Steven!

SS, I love most of your LW stories. My favorites concentrate on rebuilding a life after the disaster, instead of milking the agony before the explosion, so this one was right up my alley. Thanks.

That said, while I hope you continue to write LW stories, I would love to see you tackle a larger theme. I think once you grasp the difference between a short story and a novel (not just length, the structure is completely different, of course) you'll get great at that, too.

Be sure to let us know where to look for your longer, broader works. I'd just start dropping ebooks on the kindle site at amazon, if I were you. But don't forget to tell us your nom de plume for that genre.

How you can be so prolific ! It takes me 6 months to write one chapter.

The story was well thought out and the editing was seamless and perfect.

11 pages are much, since I started to write stories........

Well paced with sprints interceded but always going the distance! Thanks again for great read.

I thought that Callista Fornio did a bang up job of editing this story.

For being her first time editing and having eleven pages to edit, she did a very good job.

Thanks for making the reading a pleasure. .

That's the problem with very good stories, I want them to just go on and on.

Well done Stang.

Thanks for the read.

It took all damn day to read it but I am glad I did. Lisa was a tramp and deserved to get burned. I almost yelled "Stupid bitch" when Dave gave her a legitimate chance to save the marriage, although I thought he was a jerk off for offering, and she instantly went cock seeking. Good read!!!

First pass, by the end I was empathizing with the wife, not the hubby. He came across to me as an insecure runaway wimp who let everyone else dictate his responses. Not the usual SS story line. Haven't rated it yet, will reread first.

Then again, I could have lost the thread after page 4 gazillion or so.

Will repost after my second read.

Sorry to hear of your loss, but this story is one of your best. Took just under an hour to finish.

Please do not stop writing. I check every few days to see if you have added another.

Having living in Oklahoma durring tornado season I can testify to the fact that several Pizza Joints will in fact deliver after a tornado hits. I would suspect that when they start delivering depends on when the employees can make it in. Also, loved the story.

Just wanted to clarify my preceding statement. We at Domino's do not put our employees in any danger. During bad weather or any other mess, we hold up deliveries and shut down until the situation is over. THEN, we deliver. That's what we do. We deliver. Stang, you just keep on with your deliveries. ron

Yes, Domino's does deliver after any bad weather, lol. Stang, I have long been a fan of yours. This story, Entrapment and Back on the Block among my favorites. Keep up the good work, Sir.

gordo12 who did not beleve pizzas got delivered after tornando/rainstorm in the story. Pizza was still being delivered after Hurricanes in Florida, Even after the eqrthquakes in California, One service was using a boat to do pizza delivery after the mississippi flooded and others snowmobiles during last snow blizzard in midwest.

When there is money to be made, people who want that moeney find a way!

This is more like it. Didn't like that strange stuff you wrote. Stick to this and you have a fan.

You just keep me hooked waiting for you next one. Great story.

Always enjoy your stories. Keep em coming.

Thanks

Major tornado, city and streets wrecked but good old Dominos is out there delivering pizzas. Seriously?

My finger hurts from writing on this cellphone.

Number 1 daughter says I should buy a laptop.but I am still looking for a typewriter.

LOL

A Merry Man

What is a matter with you,folks. You are getting FREE entertainment and are soooo whiney.

I will read the story tomorrow. But knew the comments would be interesting so I

skipped to them. Wow thats entertainment. If we disgust SS06 enough he might try to be a REAL writer. Then we all would have to pay to read his stuff . And then bitch about him. You know , he used to write real well but now just does it for money.

Like we do with Stephan King. I know I spelled his first name wrong.Sorry.

A Merry Man

P.S. Cantbuymy you gave me a heart attack. Hallarious !!

Sometimes when you stretch your literary wings you lose me. I've not enjoyed your last few and I was hoping for one like this.

Some have described it as predictable and boring, but I beg to differ. I guess there are those of us who enjoy seeing a man done wrong come out on top of things for a change. I like to see a man wind up falling on his ass and getting a better deal after the pain is over. Maybe it's not realistic, but it still feels good. That's why it's fiction. Anything can happen.

Five full stars and keep 'em coming.

The story was predictable. I find it interesting that folks are taking up for the author. Why? This story was kinda boring, for all the reasons mentioned: the male character was robotic and intractable. And I didn't feel there was any realistic progression from somewhat happily married and faithful wife to slut.

I appreciate that I am not a writer. But I think I, and others, should be allowed to critique those that are. So, I'm not understanding why people are so defensive for a story that was predictable, slow-moving, and not at all exciting.

Haven't read a word of it yet, but I wanted to balance the assholes who read a paragraph and stop and say it was terrible.

Every time I get to read one of your stories I expect you to do well...and you do - everytime. I think you have become an outstanding author. Thanks for the enjoyable hours your stories give us. 5 Stars...

An English major and so many mistakes editing? 5 stars as usual despite the errors. I like the story and the characters. Predictable yes, but the characters were endearing and believable. Situations like this happen all the time in life.