All Comments on 'Good Cop / Bad cop Ch. 01'

...but, I hope that future installments run a little longer than 751 words and actually complete a scene before ending it.

Would you be upset if your car stopped running just after you started it? Well, I know I would be. If this is the way you write please stop! there's enough teasing without another P T

i really think that it could go on to be something good but then it really sucked, no offense. if your going to write a story then write it well

"three stikes and you're out"???? I don't think that applies to speeding tickets ... damn ... stupid story NOT EROTIC!

The obvious second part will prove the quality of the story !

Personally: The cop is a bit too vanilla, at the same time the victim is too willing. For my taste... ;)

Why do cops wear handcuffs and guns you think ? For catching the bad guys or forcing them to do things they don't want to !

:o

Can still be interesting in future installments. However, if you want people to read those, you have to capture them in Part I. This short piece offers little to capture anyone, because there is barely any character development and not exactly a lot of things happening.