All Comments on 'Good Demon, Bad Angel'

Very entertaining. Well written too. Thank you. *****

The sex was great, the narrator was hilarious. Great job of story telling

A very fun read.

This story was as boring as you made Gray out to be.

EZ8lt, Fair point about the futa tag. It didn't even occur to me. I'll see about changing that if I do any edits. I will probably eventually give it another read to check for spelling errors, because I can never seem to catch them all. Thank you for raising my awareness.

Happy to proof read the next one. PM me if you want a proofreader. I have references. I loved this story. Usually I read them in one shot, but I wanted to stretch out this experience. Gray felt like a Belle(not sure if that's her name. The chick from twilight) character. I especially like the narrator aspect. Good fourth wall breaking.

I was disappointed for the Angel's "ending"(since she's eternal). Always the side chick. Would love to hear more from her perspective, maybe later she finds her own side piece. Kudos for an excellent story, now I'll go peruse your others. -y4

[28.07.22]

Flippin' F'n FUNNY!

Reminded me of the 'intro' of issue 1 of Ironwood by Bill "Fables' Willingham with the sarcastic v.o..

11/10 Angel Finger Dicks!!!!!

I don’t know why, but the uber subjective style that doesn’t even acknowledge a fourth wall feels both dated and like something I’d read on fanfiction. Which is an odd combination, ngl.

@anonymous "Which is an odd combination, ngl."

*grins* Why, thank you. ;)

Too over the top for an old Man like me. Left me confused. Reminded me of an anime story which I’m not into either. Can’t judge it cause I don’t understand it. I’ll leave it to the Gen Z’s

Re: "Reminded me of an anime story"

It was originally imagined as an anime. :D