by Bh76
Nicely written story and I think Julia will have her own coming up
Thanks for writing
What a lovely way for closure on this thread. This is a great "universe " you've created full of interesting characters. Thank you.
An unexpected surprise story in this universe. I always wondered how Lisa's life evolved. Thank you for filling in the gaps. 5*
I did not read the other stories iln this sequence and I thought this was very ordinary. Did I miss something or did something momentous happen to Julia to get her to change her mind about being maid of honor? And what did the fill-in maid of honor do? Not much of a story and it doesn't get mucsh of a rating: 3*
Well written, enjoyable, and unfortunately very real life. Idiot jealousy abounds! Sibling jealousy is terrible and happens far too often for no discernible reason, at least, cogent discernible reason. 5 stars.
What happened to change Julia’s mind so dramatically? You can’t leave us hanging as that problem between the sisters is a core element of the entire story. Marked down from 4* to 3* for that
I LOVE your universe! I've read nearly all uoir stories, and you really know how to write both male and female characters!
I don't so much mind that that woman got her happiness, but the irritating and shameless fact that she's shallow as *&(&^ and only liked the guy because he's "perfect dream looking" is annoying AF. Also, the miraculous re-appearance of the sister at the wedding is NOT explained, beyond "It doesn't matter right now. I'll tell you later."
The story was disappointing. I did not enjoy reading about some silly girl acting like a ***** to her sister.
While the mystery of Julia's epiphany is intriguing, the real question this story has me asking is, "how long has the mom been cheating on the dad for?" The way she flirted, kept going on about the gorgeous twins, and her dismissive attitude to the dad makes one wonder... Hmm....
Lovely story and a very nice addition to your universe of stories. I’m sure that we’d all love to know more about Julia’s change of mind, but I prefer to consider it ‘foreshadowing’ of a future addition to the universe. Thanks for writing this satisfying chapter. 5*
Will Julia and Drake stay together? I hope so.
I do believe the sex was rushed after all she was still feeling the effects of the breakup with Jimmy, even after three years.
I hope that mom is not having an affair. as suggested by another commenter.
I am curious over Julia's change. as said, 'Julia's epiphany is intriguing.'
Did Jimmy's friends come clean to Jimmy?
Maybe Jimmy some how talked with Julia?
I really hope there is a 'happy ever after', with Lisa & Connor and Julia & Drake.
I’ve enjoyed every story in this universe. I’m hoping more will follow. Jjimmy’s friends took advantage of an extremely drunk Lisa. She never used it as en excuse. A girl who has no memory of events is not capable of giving consent. I enjoyed reading Lisa’s story of her redemption. And Julia? My bet is that Drake told her to be at the wedding, or he’d dump her… although it’s unclear why she bought the dress. The sizing, alterations, and final fitting are a lot of effort and couldn’t be done at the last moment.
I know that this is part of a series of stories, but I still think there should've been more build up at the beginning and that Connor and Lisa should have gotten to know each other over a longer period of time. One or two days is a bit ridiculous. Perhaps six months would've been better. A slow burn is much more preferred. 3*
When Drake saw her, he rushed over and hugged her. I could swear I heard him say, "Thank God! I didn't want to lose you.". Julia said she learned a hard lesson that morning about family being everything I took this to be why Julia showed up - Drake must have talked to her that morning and explained things to her as he had earlier to his brother. He let her know he was ready to walk away from her if she did not change.
Couple loose ends in this one has me craving for more. We never get a good explanation for Drake trying to get that kiss and, of course, what happened that morning. Great writing as always - 4.6*
Story didn’t feel right, felt rushed, things didn’t click into place they were just changed to progress the story, like Julia’s sudden and unexplained change in behaviour and rocking up at the wedding, not to mention the lack of mentioning that drake tried to kiss lisa even as a prank that’s a no no.
Great story! Always loved good ending! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!
A bit wonky in some places like the kiss and what caused the sister to change her mind but overall a great 5 star story.